6/13/09

55 fiction: A hidden truth


He opened the window wide, he believed faith would come in with the wind.
He knew she'd made him the happiest person on Earth after the night.

She was lying peacefully, with nothing but a white blanket over her. Her beautiful brown hair covering her lily white face.

He kissed her.Softly.A kiss to end the torture and pain.


And put the dagger inside her chest.
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45 comments:

  1. ShrutiJune 13, 2009 at 11:38 AM

    u know i'll say just one word for this one...

    *sexy*

    mwah! keep it coming...

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  2. aneri_masiJune 13, 2009 at 1:07 PM

    Nahinnnnnnnnn!!! Why did he do that now?!

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  3. RichaJune 13, 2009 at 1:21 PM

    now ths fatal :)

    awesome!!

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  4. gypsyJune 13, 2009 at 1:46 PM

    i did soemthing on the same lines... and guess what that was 55 fiction as well...

    u managed it brilliantly well,,,carries a hint of possessiveness and 'all for me' spirit...

    and why do i feel that u changed ur template again...in case u dint, dont blast me off, i dont notice them much... but the color purple -m loving it-very subtle...

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  5. Hemanth PotluriJune 13, 2009 at 3:03 PM

    dark again :)....but yeah it was good he gave her the beautiful kiss :)..

    urs..hemu..

    p.s:i put the modified write also in my post u gave :)..

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  6. AnonymousJune 13, 2009 at 3:45 PM

    You've started to scare me!!! You love writing dark stuff.

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  7. Amal BoseJune 13, 2009 at 5:19 PM

    Y did he do that?
    the image kinda ruined the surprise for me.. but really beautiful writing..

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  8. WarmSunshineJune 13, 2009 at 7:22 PM

    yeh kya howa??? why did he do that??

    love the new look!

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  9. AnonymousJune 13, 2009 at 8:47 PM

    basic instinct movie flashed across my memory cells

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  10. Pree-yea....June 13, 2009 at 9:02 PM

    I think u need to xplain a bit more..! Just y did he do that..?
    Oh n ur too gud at writing dark stuff..! :)

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  11. SAHITYIKAJune 13, 2009 at 9:27 PM

    hi..
    nice one..
    bt why always such sad kindda fiction..
    try some happy n joyful things..

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  12. ArvJune 14, 2009 at 5:12 AM

    welcome darkness :)

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  13. Priya JoyceJune 14, 2009 at 7:22 AM

    the first part was as like wat shruti said "sexy" ;)

    well the second...no definitions..on it..
    ahhhh!!

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  14. AnuragJune 14, 2009 at 10:31 AM

    oye teko bhi lag gayaa 55 fiction ka kiidaa....

    This was dramatic....Basic instinct is right....Dark and gory...Did I say that it defines your blog :P

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  15. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:08 PM

    @ Shruti,
    Muuah..thanks a zillion!

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  16. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:08 PM

    @ Aneri,
    Thats on your imagination.. on my dimmaag.i had it because she cheated on him, and he caught her.. so he killed his lover . :)..love hurts!

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  17. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:13 PM

    Thanks a lot, Richa!

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  18. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:14 PM

    @ Gypsy,
    O really? Will read it..
    and yea..I did =)..love purple .

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  19. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:19 PM

    @ Hemanth,
    I read the version..seemed satisfactory to me =)
    Thanks.. aah..the kiss.lol!

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  20. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:22 PM

    @ Rakesh,
    Come on..not all are dark! This one was randoooom!

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  21. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:22 PM

    @ Amal,
    Had added the img towards the end..then put it on top jlt!

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  22. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:23 PM

    @ Sunshine,
    Ditto Aneri's reply..
    *Thats on your imagination.. on my dimmaag.i had it because she cheated on him, and he caught her.. so he killed his lover . :)..love can be painful!


    Thankyou so much!

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  23. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:23 PM

    @ Chriz,
    Call that the inspiration then! :)

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  24. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:50 PM

    @ Pree,
    Ditto Meher's reply..
    Thnx..!!

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  25. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:51 PM

    @ Sahityika,
    Try the last post..I don't think it was sad.

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  26. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:51 PM

    @ Arv,
    Hell..nO!..light's always thr..some darkness stays in reserve! :D

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  27. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:52 PM

    @ PRiya,
    :D..thankya!

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  28. CяystalJune 14, 2009 at 1:52 PM

    @ Anurag,
    nooo..you didn't :P
    Thanku thanku!

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  29. AmitJune 14, 2009 at 5:37 PM

    awesome! well done!

    following ur blog from now on, keep writing, would love to come here again! Do visit!

    Cheers!

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  30. AnonymousJune 14, 2009 at 11:48 PM

    ur 55 fictions are just perfect !!

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  31. rainboyJune 15, 2009 at 12:07 AM

    that was dark...

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  32. Preetilata【ツ】June 15, 2009 at 3:10 AM

    oopsss beautifully dark it was aayu. :)

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  33. KeshiJune 15, 2009 at 10:42 AM

    The kiss of death?

    Good one Crystal. A bit too 'real' for me ;-)

    Keshi.

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  34. CяystalJune 15, 2009 at 11:34 AM

    @ Hopeless,
    Visited you tooo..thanks for being here.

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  35. CяystalJune 15, 2009 at 11:34 AM

    Thanks a ton, Pretty !

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  36. CяystalJune 15, 2009 at 11:34 AM

    I know, Rabbit.

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  37. CяystalJune 15, 2009 at 11:34 AM

    @ Preetilata,
    Was beautiful?

    Thanks.

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  38. CяystalJune 15, 2009 at 11:35 AM

    @ Keshi,
    Yes, precisely a kiss of death. haha!

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  39. KeshiJune 16, 2009 at 5:56 AM

    ;-)

    Keshi.

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  40. Preetilata【ツ】June 21, 2009 at 1:33 PM

    dark is beautiful too.. at least literature makes it.. and so do u :)

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  41. Rushabhh GandhiJune 26, 2009 at 1:31 PM

    This was a perfect shot.. I read your most recent 55 fiction, and i thought i have read better than this ones from you...and here itself it is..This one simply too good! Sexy! ;)

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  42. MadsJuly 2, 2009 at 4:55 PM

    Liked this one...dark and...nice :D

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  43. CяystalJuly 12, 2009 at 11:21 AM

    @ Keshi,
    :D

    @ Preeti,
    Geee..:)

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  44. CяystalJuly 12, 2009 at 11:22 AM

    @ Rushabh,
    Yayy.. thankyou so much! =)

    # Mads,
    Thankyou thankyou!

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  45. StupidosaurJuly 12, 2009 at 11:52 PM

    errr you hid all posts on the other blog?

    I think this post was duplicated there wasn't it? And I commented there right.

    At least let me know what the comment was, so that I can repost it here exactly like that ;)

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