I am the consistently burning flame of the candle
I am the calmness and tranquility of the sea
I am the power of Dusk and Dawn
I am the beauty in the feathers of a fawn.
I am not the farewell I bid to thee.
I am not the Angel in yesterday's reverie
I am not the cold and sour laugh you heard
I am not the dullness in a discouraging word
I am what you often hide from yourself
I am the road which leads you to your goal
I am the will which makes you stable
I am the strength both abled and disabled
There is more to me than what the eyes can see
There is less in me than what can be
You don't know me well; but still you do
Because I'm the power residing in you.
I'm your conscience.
Jun 2, 2009
I'm. . . . . .
Labels: dark poetry, poems, the girl that I was
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well wow....
i loved the way u played wth words..
specially the last para..
arey wah
damn good style
liked it
vyo
sis its just beautiful :)..its dark of a kind but awesomely beautiful :)..sis wat ever u say ur but ur always the cute pie :)...just remember that :)...
urs..hemu..
P.S: u have something in my blog pass by when time permits :)..
nice poem. different state of mind. i m bold woman :)
lovely lovely lovely..
i am what i am
i am a humor man
complete humor man since 1982
chriz
i loved the ending ... "i am the power residing in you" :)
loved it
so me
had the right attitude
Wonderful !!
I loved the way you juxtaposed the words and coupled them with the right chords girlie !
Good going !
Wow. that was indeed deep !
A lovely ode to the inner self :)
take care mate... cheers...
thats well done after the two previous postss.. and good style of writing :) was confused in the beginning.. too much of i ams.. and the last line made it all clear :) well done ! cheers
:) the way u have weaved the poem is brilliant...
the words are a gud choice...
nice and different stuff from u
brilliant work..
loved every word of it..
Are u sure you're in class 9???
coz this doesnt really justify ur age!!
It was friggin' great Aayushi!!!!
I mean...every word hid so much more than it actually showed!!
Bravo!
Keep it up..
heers
:)
Now that is what I call super-sexy-mind-boggling-top-class poetry! :P
ok, cutting the cheesiness.. I toh LOVED it!
u always do that aayu, surprise us.. and I like that :)
nice one...
n this is d reason i call u a prodigy :)
beautiful :)
fabulous poetry...beautiful!
take a bow...rather I should bow in ur honour:)
super stuff...each verse,each line, each word...perfectly in place!!!
ohh mann ...Brilliant ...thanxs for clarifying that it was conscience that you were referring to ....but this was beyond imaginatively brilliant :)
another cindy in making..guess what ab I have to buy a new dictionary....
lol
jokes aside....
loved the lines and of course the theme...
@ PJ,
Thnx a lot,sweetie. =)
Thanks a lot,Vyzz.
And welcome hre.
@ Hemanth,
Will do that in a splitsecond.
Thanks a ton! =)
Nidzzi.. =)
@ Chronicwriter,
Ahaan! And that's why even after being 13 years younger to you, I love what you write. =P
Thnx!
Thankyou, WarmSunshine!..(Meherr)
@ TPM,
Yeah!..
Thnx..!!
@ Cindi,
Just came out.. thnx a ton!
Thanks,Pisku!
@ Arv,
We all need to acknowledge it one time or the other..:)
Thnx..!!
@ Shravan,
Last two posts were just ramblings..try reading old posts if you're interested ini what I write, and not my ramblings =D
Thankyou!
@ D Gypsy,
tried making it a bit positive this time..thnx,buddy..!!
Thanks a lot,Amal.
@ Shruti,
Yes babyy..I very much am..though I look buddhi to you..lol :D
Thanks a lot..*cheers*
@ Shatabdi,
"Now that is what I call super-sexy-mind-boggling-top-class poetry! :P"
Aaaaaaawe..lOL!..
Thankyou,Shatab!..love you! =D
Thnx Hp!!!!
Mayz.. aawe..thanks a lot :)
Thnx, Phoenix..:)
Thanks a lot, Anwesa..=)
@ Cn,
:)))...
Thats kind of ya,bhai!..thanks a ton.
@ Anurag,
Ya? =)..what did yu think I was talking about?..
Anyway..thnx a lot.
@ ♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ ,
LOL!..Cindi in making? That's a bada vaala compliment!!..thankyou soooo much,bro!
wow! almost felt as if am talking to myself! bravo!
Omi
^^
Thankyou !...
A truly amazing ode to Conscience! I loved it Crystal.
**I am what you often hide from yourself
I am the road which leads you to your goal
I love the way u put that.
It takes alot of understanding, experience and skill to write something like this. And at such a tender age, I wonder how u do that? Well done girl!
Keshi.
btw I love the pic in this post, and also ur new template. Awesome n classy!
Keshi.
@ Keshi,
Thanks a lot.
Nothing at all..just let the words flow, and they happen. :)
Thanks for complimenting the template..going to stick to this!!
Wow! That was just wonderful, you scored full girl :)
Cheers :)
^^ Thankyou. :)
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