6/2/09

I'm. . . . . .


I am the consistently burning flame of the candle
I am the calmness and tranquility of the sea
I am the power of Dusk and Dawn
I am the beauty in the feathers of a fawn.

I am not the farewell I bid to thee.
I am not the Angel in yesterday's reverie
I am not the cold and sour laugh you heard
I am not the dullness in a discouraging word

I am what you often hide from yourself
I am the road which leads you to your goal
I am the will which makes you stable
I am the strength both abled and disabled

There is more to me than what the eyes can see
There is less in me than what can be
You don't know me well; but still you do
Because I'm the power residing in you.



I'm your conscience.
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53 comments:

  1. Priya JoyceJune 2, 2009 at 2:04 PM

    well wow....

    i loved the way u played wth words..

    specially the last para..

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  2. VyzzJune 2, 2009 at 2:30 PM

    arey wah

    damn good style

    liked it

    vyo

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  3. Hemanth PotluriJune 2, 2009 at 2:31 PM

    sis its just beautiful :)..its dark of a kind but awesomely beautiful :)..sis wat ever u say ur but ur always the cute pie :)...just remember that :)...

    urs..hemu..

    P.S: u have something in my blog pass by when time permits :)..

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  4. NidzJune 2, 2009 at 2:44 PM

    nice poem. different state of mind. i m bold woman :)

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  5. AnyaJune 2, 2009 at 4:17 PM

    lovely lovely lovely..

    i am what i am

    i am a humor man
    complete humor man since 1982

    chriz

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  6. WarmSunshineJune 2, 2009 at 4:19 PM

    i loved the ending ... "i am the power residing in you" :)

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  7. Amused AlienJune 2, 2009 at 4:30 PM

    loved it

    so me
    had the right attitude

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  8. CinderellaJune 2, 2009 at 4:59 PM

    Wonderful !!

    I loved the way you juxtaposed the words and coupled them with the right chords girlie !

    Good going !

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  9. piskuJune 2, 2009 at 5:49 PM

    Wow. that was indeed deep !

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  10. ArvJune 2, 2009 at 6:01 PM

    A lovely ode to the inner self :)

    take care mate... cheers...

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  11. Shravan RNJune 2, 2009 at 6:23 PM

    thats well done after the two previous postss.. and good style of writing :) was confused in the beginning.. too much of i ams.. and the last line made it all clear :) well done ! cheers

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  12. gypsyJune 2, 2009 at 6:43 PM

    :) the way u have weaved the poem is brilliant...

    the words are a gud choice...

    nice and different stuff from u

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  13. Amal BoseJune 2, 2009 at 7:22 PM

    brilliant work..
    loved every word of it..

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  14. ShrutiJune 2, 2009 at 7:58 PM

    Are u sure you're in class 9???
    coz this doesnt really justify ur age!!
    It was friggin' great Aayushi!!!!

    I mean...every word hid so much more than it actually showed!!

    Bravo!

    Keep it up..
    heers
    :)

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  15. ExpressJune 2, 2009 at 8:51 PM

    Now that is what I call super-sexy-mind-boggling-top-class poetry! :P

    ok, cutting the cheesiness.. I toh LOVED it!

    u always do that aayu, surprise us.. and I like that :)

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  16. HPJune 2, 2009 at 9:36 PM

    nice one...

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  17. LuciferJune 2, 2009 at 10:45 PM

    n this is d reason i call u a prodigy :)

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  18. PhoenixJune 2, 2009 at 10:47 PM

    beautiful :)

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  19. AnwesaJune 3, 2009 at 12:02 AM

    fabulous poetry...beautiful!

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  20. SaimJune 3, 2009 at 12:45 AM

    take a bow...rather I should bow in ur honour:)
    super stuff...each verse,each line, each word...perfectly in place!!!

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  21. AnuragJune 3, 2009 at 9:34 AM

    ohh mann ...Brilliant ...thanxs for clarifying that it was conscience that you were referring to ....but this was beyond imaginatively brilliant :)

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  22. ♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥June 3, 2009 at 10:36 AM

    another cindy in making..guess what ab I have to buy a new dictionary....

    lol

    jokes aside....

    loved the lines and of course the theme...

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  23. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 10:54 AM

    @ PJ,
    Thnx a lot,sweetie. =)

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  24. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 10:57 AM

    Thanks a lot,Vyzz.
    And welcome hre.

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  25. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 10:59 AM

    @ Hemanth,
    Will do that in a splitsecond.
    Thanks a ton! =)

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  26. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:03 AM

    Nidzzi.. =)

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  27. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:04 AM

    @ Chronicwriter,
    Ahaan! And that's why even after being 13 years younger to you, I love what you write. =P

    Thnx!

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  28. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:05 AM

    Thankyou, WarmSunshine!..(Meherr)

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  29. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:05 AM

    @ TPM,
    Yeah!..
    Thnx..!!

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  30. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:06 AM

    @ Cindi,
    Just came out.. thnx a ton!

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  31. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:07 AM

    Thanks,Pisku!

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  32. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:07 AM

    @ Arv,
    We all need to acknowledge it one time or the other..:)
    Thnx..!!

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  33. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:08 AM

    @ Shravan,
    Last two posts were just ramblings..try reading old posts if you're interested ini what I write, and not my ramblings =D
    Thankyou!

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  34. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:18 AM

    @ D Gypsy,
    tried making it a bit positive this time..thnx,buddy..!!

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  35. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:18 AM

    Thanks a lot,Amal.

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  36. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:19 AM

    @ Shruti,
    Yes babyy..I very much am..though I look buddhi to you..lol :D
    Thanks a lot..*cheers*

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  37. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:19 AM

    @ Shatabdi,
    "Now that is what I call super-sexy-mind-boggling-top-class poetry! :P"

    Aaaaaaawe..lOL!..

    Thankyou,Shatab!..love you! =D

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  38. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:20 AM

    Thnx Hp!!!!

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  39. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:20 AM

    Mayz.. aawe..thanks a lot :)

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  40. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:21 AM

    Thnx, Phoenix..:)

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  41. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:21 AM

    Thanks a lot, Anwesa..=)

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  42. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:21 AM

    @ Cn,
    :)))...
    Thats kind of ya,bhai!..thanks a ton.

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  43. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:22 AM

    @ Anurag,
    Ya? =)..what did yu think I was talking about?..
    Anyway..thnx a lot.

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  44. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 11:23 AM

    @ ♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥ ,
    LOL!..Cindi in making? That's a bada vaala compliment!!..thankyou soooo much,bro!

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  45. BIG OmiJune 3, 2009 at 1:06 PM

    wow! almost felt as if am talking to myself! bravo!
    Omi

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  46. CяystalJune 3, 2009 at 1:19 PM

    ^^
    Thankyou !...

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  47. KeshiJune 4, 2009 at 5:51 AM

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  48. KeshiJune 4, 2009 at 5:52 AM

    A truly amazing ode to Conscience! I loved it Crystal.


    **I am what you often hide from yourself
    I am the road which leads you to your goal


    I love the way u put that.


    It takes alot of understanding, experience and skill to write something like this. And at such a tender age, I wonder how u do that? Well done girl!


    Keshi.

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  49. KeshiJune 4, 2009 at 5:55 AM

    btw I love the pic in this post, and also ur new template. Awesome n classy!

    Keshi.

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  50. CяystalJune 4, 2009 at 10:06 AM

    @ Keshi,
    Thanks a lot.
    Nothing at all..just let the words flow, and they happen. :)

    Thanks for complimenting the template..going to stick to this!!

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  51. DiyaJune 4, 2009 at 12:52 PM

    Wow! That was just wonderful, you scored full girl :)
    Cheers :)

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  52. CяystalJuly 12, 2009 at 11:24 AM

    ^^ Thankyou. :)

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  53. One Life. Many Moments.November 19, 2011 at 5:48 PM

    This one is spiffing. Beautifully knitted.
    Add me to ur fan-ist , ryt now. Ur brilliant.

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