12/9/08

Cessation

Along with a flight of wicked laughter
Stepped,in a state of utter pride
With an ugly bash of cruelty
The same old destroyer
A knife in one hand
He slit the soul
Immune she lay
Decoding
Life

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Full stops to so many lives are put at these days.. A suicide or a murder..when people leave you,it may hurt forever.

This nonnet is just an attempt of explaining the despair of a girl whose been raped of her happiness,and has been left to understand the complications of life,and continue living even if she has to die for understanding the complications.. SO IS LIFE!





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84 comments:

  1. HPDecember 9, 2008 at 12:11 PM

    i've already told u ... but ... MAST likha hai !

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  2. --xh--December 9, 2008 at 12:14 PM

    the last line is so well written.. and of course the nonet also...

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  3. Hemanth PotluriDecember 9, 2008 at 12:15 PM

    beautiful done sissy ....:)..awesome piece :)..


    urs..hemu..

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  4. Shravan VijayaprasadDecember 9, 2008 at 12:22 PM

    wow!! Nice cue you've taken from Sami and all!!

    Very beautifully written sonnet.. You've got into this habit of being a heart touching writer!!

    Wowww!! :):):)

    I feel so much younger to you when you write such stuff! (cos you seem so mature) :)

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  5. Suresh KumarDecember 9, 2008 at 12:37 PM

    To be frank with you, I got stuck in the last line... Immune she lay decoding life. R u meaning to say when death neared her or just kissed her and left, she wanted to know of living in this cruel world.... That lines are making me think too much... Wud love to know in what sense u used those lines...'Immune .... decoding life'

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  6. ShrutiDecember 9, 2008 at 12:44 PM

    deep..mature..sane..and beautiful

    *Salutes*

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  7. Suresh KumarDecember 9, 2008 at 1:35 PM

    Hmm... Crystal clear... You have made your viewpoint.
    Even I tried to touch upon the concept of Karma. But I always tried to do in a lighter fashion.
    Remember reading Many Lives, Many Masters. Each life is given to us to learn some lessons.... Get a copy of the book. Its by Dr Brian Weiss.

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  8. Priya JoyceDecember 9, 2008 at 2:28 PM

    hey li'l gal will be bakk soon to read ur posts..till then i wanna hav ur email id to invite ya for ma blog..

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  9. DMulanDecember 9, 2008 at 2:30 PM

    'crystal' clear and to the point. it isn't easy writing a nonnet after all.. good work!

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  10. abhishekDecember 9, 2008 at 2:33 PM

    v.gooood...

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  11. WarmSunshineDecember 9, 2008 at 2:42 PM

    That was quite an attempt dearie... Beautifully put... you've beautifully captured it dear :)

    Keep up the good work :)

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  12. DisguiseDecember 9, 2008 at 2:47 PM

    I LOVE the last line.

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  13. LenaDecember 9, 2008 at 2:51 PM

    very deep, aayushi.. great attempt of nonet :)

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  14. lukkydivzDecember 9, 2008 at 2:56 PM

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  15. skeptic saintDecember 9, 2008 at 3:26 PM

    beautiful and profound...

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  16. UnknownDecember 9, 2008 at 3:40 PM

    Why is it "the same old destroyer"?

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  17. ExpressDecember 9, 2008 at 3:41 PM

    Brave attempt, very.
    and the decoding life thing, was simply awe-some.

    You have the hang, u knw it. Good job!

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  18. peterDecember 9, 2008 at 3:54 PM

    ahh so many sad posts all around :((

    btw a nice arrangement or design rather of wrds :D

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  19. ArvDecember 9, 2008 at 6:52 PM

    that was a good one about a dark and deep thought... sad though :(

    well written mate... good one :)

    Cheers...

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  20. Preetilata【ツ】December 9, 2008 at 7:49 PM

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  21. PhoenixDecember 9, 2008 at 9:14 PM

    everyone seems to be writing nonnets these days.. and you did a good job with it..

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  22. PriyaDecember 9, 2008 at 10:05 PM

    Good one.

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  23. KartzDecember 10, 2008 at 12:40 AM

    Hmmm... People come into your life for one of three things - a reason, a season, or a lifetime.

    Once this is realized, such "longing" and "yearning" won't be a part. And 'moving on with life' will indeed be a lot easier.

    Good one. Liked the style in which your verse flowed.

    Just an itch; the first line... "a-long with a flight of wick-ed laugh-ter" : isn't that ten syllables?

    Peace.
    ---
    Ok ok... What's happening?

    Nonnents nonnets everywhere, quite a few did write.
    Nonnents nonnets everywhere, yeah - I'm yet to try all right! :P

    Peace.

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  24. Pranav Kumar VDecember 10, 2008 at 4:50 AM

    This is the 5th nonet I'm reading today and I'm just loving all of them!! Guess girls are doing way better than guys when it comes to conveying the message they're putting through.

    He slit the soul
    Immune she lay
    Decoding
    Life

    Great going!! :)

    See you when I see you... :)

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  25. muZerDecember 10, 2008 at 9:13 AM

    macabre.. sch is life for da few unfortunate ones.. sad n hurtful.. !!

    nicely written,, though,, xplains da cessation.. !!

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  26. ChroniclerDecember 10, 2008 at 9:37 AM

    beautiful...

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  27. RiverSoulDecember 10, 2008 at 10:47 AM

    My god!
    Everyone is so good at nonnets.....
    :)
    Nice work Ayu
    :)
    ;)

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  28. SMRITIDecember 10, 2008 at 10:49 AM

    Sad but true. Now I am realising that nonnets are as powerful in their effect as anything else.

    This was nicely done. :)

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  29. LuciferDecember 10, 2008 at 11:49 AM

    this was lovely...i think d nonnet did more justice to this than any other long piece cud have

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  30. ♥ÐÅyÐяєÅмє®♥December 10, 2008 at 12:33 PM

    wow that's awesome....that was a superleague material

    I liked the portrayal ...awesome

    raping and murdering are shit..one shud kill the rapist and the murderer

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  31. Rushabhh GandhiDecember 10, 2008 at 4:10 PM

    I loved the Nonnet and understood it my way and then i read your explaination for it...it just adds so lot of meaning to it....

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  32. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:23 PM

    Thnkuu Hp!

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  33. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:24 PM

    Gracias Xh!!!

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  34. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:24 PM

    Thnx Hemu

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  35. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:25 PM

    @ Shrav,
    *Nonnet..
    Lol! Thanks..thats too big a compliment

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  36. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:25 PM

    @ Suresh,
    I hope you understand after I posted you my reply on your blog..

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  37. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:26 PM

    Gracias Shruti!

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  38. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:30 PM

    Thnku Pj!

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  39. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:30 PM

    Gracias Divya

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  40. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:30 PM

    Hm....thnx Abhishek

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  41. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:31 PM

    Thanks Meher..me is glad you liked it!

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  42. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:34 PM

    Disguise--> :))

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  43. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:34 PM

    Thnku Lena!

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  44. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:34 PM

    Thnku Skeptic Saint!

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  45. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:36 PM

    @ Alok,
    'Cos he's always been upto such malice

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  46. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:36 PM

    Love you,Shatab!
    Thnkuu

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  47. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:36 PM

    Gracias Peter

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  48. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:37 PM

    @ Arv,
    Sad..I know :(

    Thanks!!!!
    i liked your nonnet as well

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  49. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:38 PM

    Gracias Phoenix

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  50. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:38 PM

    Thanks Priya

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  51. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:40 PM

    @ Kartz,
    ***People come into your life for one of three things - a reason, a season, or a lifetime.

    Haha..nice line =|

    And a-long is one syllable..:|
    According to Wikipedia..don't question t

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  52. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:40 PM

    @ Pranav,
    Haha..thnx!

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  53. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:41 PM

    Though I didn't undertsd what you meant by------see you when I see you :|

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  54. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:41 PM

    @ :-)
    Em glad..and welcome here

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  55. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:42 PM

    Thanks Swayam..

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  56. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:42 PM

    @ Riversoul,
    Everyone!..huh
    Thanks

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  57. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:43 PM

    @ Smriti,
    Yeah..true.

    Gracias,milady!

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  58. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:43 PM

    @ Mayz,
    Glad.
    ...thnx!

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  59. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:44 PM

    @ DD,
    Killing isn't always the way out,,

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  60. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:45 PM

    @ Rushabh,
    Thnx,dude..=)

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  61. CяystalDecember 10, 2008 at 4:45 PM

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  62. Nikhil MenonDecember 10, 2008 at 5:16 PM

    the nonnet jus cudn have been better...missed ur space for quite sumtym hanks to exams..glad am back.. :)

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  63. ArunimaDecember 10, 2008 at 5:52 PM

    Hey dear concluding line of the poem is ultimate.
    It's tough to convey sumthing in limited/exact lines bt u did it to perfection.

    I feel like trying it out too.
    :)

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  64. gypsyDecember 10, 2008 at 6:58 PM

    brilliant ...

    i loved every bit of it

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  65. KartzDecember 10, 2008 at 9:38 PM

    Beg to differ. :P Open source encyclopaedias... Errors may creep in.

    Dictionary.com

    Merriam-Webster

    I know. I can be such a pain. ;) :)

    Peace.

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  66. UnknownDecember 11, 2008 at 2:20 AM

    Okay, I now understand the perspective through which this was written. Interesting!

    And nicely constructed.

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  67. KeshiDecember 11, 2008 at 4:12 AM

    Brilliant!

    I hv no more words to express how well u've written this nonnet.


    ** the despair of a girl whose been raped of her happiness,and has been left to understand the complications of life,and continue living even if she has to die for understanding the complications


    Loved the way u put it. I can so relate to this feeling. Only u cud put words to my thoughts so beautifully. TY Crystal HUGS!

    Keshi.

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  68. CяystalDecember 11, 2008 at 6:04 PM

    @ Multimenon,
    No problems =)
    Mez glad you're back..n thankyou!!

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  69. CяystalDecember 11, 2008 at 6:05 PM

    @ Aru,
    Go for it..its fun! (though a bit tough!)

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  70. CяystalDecember 11, 2008 at 6:05 PM

    @ Gypsy,
    Thnx!

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  71. CяystalDecember 11, 2008 at 6:06 PM

    @ Kartz,
    Yes. Definite pain!

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  72. CяystalDecember 11, 2008 at 6:06 PM

    Thnkyou Alok!

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  73. CяystalDecember 11, 2008 at 6:07 PM

    @ Keshi,
    Em glad I managed to bring your thoughts up in my words =)

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  74. CяystalDecember 11, 2008 at 6:07 PM

    *huuuuuuugs!*

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  75. LukkydivsDecember 11, 2008 at 6:24 PM

    aayu, have sent u a mail on ur yahoo id .. lemme know if u've read :)

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  76. NiveditaDecember 11, 2008 at 8:31 PM

    i loved the the last 3 lines..it means so much in so little it was heart breaking but spirit lifting..
    went on to read some of ur older posts you have a great blog :)

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  77. joie de vivreDecember 11, 2008 at 10:10 PM

    my god!1
    kya shandarr likha hai yaar
    sai mein

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  78. KeshiDecember 12, 2008 at 7:50 AM

    Crystal I finally updated with the winners :)

    Keshi.

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  79. CяystalDecember 12, 2008 at 6:32 PM

    @ Divz,
    read and replied to..

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  80. CяystalDecember 12, 2008 at 6:33 PM

    thnku Nivedita..m honoured..and yes..welcome here

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  81. CяystalDecember 12, 2008 at 6:33 PM

    @ joie/neha,
    thnkz cutie..btw i replied to your email on yahoo..and added ya on gtalk..tuddles!

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  82. CяystalDecember 12, 2008 at 6:34 PM

    @ Keshi,
    Checked them out..thnkuuuu!

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  83. Sameera AnsariDecember 13, 2008 at 12:01 AM

    So heartrending!Lovely first nonnet babes :)

    Muah!

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  84. CяystalDecember 13, 2008 at 10:13 PM

    Muuah!

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