11/12/11

For the last time.




Lets immerse into one.
This moment.
Let it stay.
Tranquil.
Silent.
As we merge.
The souls meet.
The stars on your body, consumed.
The smell of it, devoured.
This moment.
Please, let it stay.


The sharp noise.
Was it your blood?
Or maybe mine.
But we continue to merge.
Into one.
One.
As our spirits roll.

And come closer than before.
This moment.
All I have.

The happiness.
The satisfaction.
It lingers.
Revolves.
The room sings today.
With you and me.
The rain too dances.

But

The angst, the fury.
They also return today.
We come together.
For the last time.
The pain.
The blood.
It flows.
The dagger.
Comes down.

Today.
We merged.
And parted.
Perhaps, forever.

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(How a lover is killed)
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38 comments:

  1. AyushiNovember 12, 2011 at 10:13 PM

    You are a romantic baby, deny it a million times, I won't stop ranting :) Love and you merge into one. One :D, when you compose such write-ups :)

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  2. RahulNovember 12, 2011 at 10:13 PM

    so u write easily about blood and murder,yet the suicides in my story made you queasy??:-D He he....dark poem...any particular reason???

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  3. CяystalNovember 12, 2011 at 10:20 PM

    Serendipity:
    *pokes tongue out*
    One, loud, stiff NO. -_-
    And this was more about a sadistic lover. ;)

    Rahul:
    Haha .. kya bataya jayei !
    And naa, no reasons at all. :)

    How did you two like the post?

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  4. GossamerDiariesNovember 12, 2011 at 11:23 PM

    One of your bests! I so loved it.. The imagery, awesome!

    "And come closer than before.
    This moment.
    All I have."

    These lines got me glued. My head spun and i was somewhere else for a brief moment.. :)

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  5. AyushiNovember 13, 2011 at 12:20 AM

    Only if you feel love, can you express sadistic angst like this so well :P

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  6. VinatiNovember 13, 2011 at 12:55 AM

    I liked the crispiness of the poetry. It was sharp, clear and passionate with a tinge of pain.
    You are very good, crystal! =)

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  7. --November 13, 2011 at 1:46 AM

    OMG!!! This is absolutely BRILLIANT! I'm speechless (yeah, happens occasionally :P) I LOVED every verse and OH, you are just SO talented far beyond your years, my precious dear! WoW! (: ~x*♥*x~ :)

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  8. Rahul BhatiaNovember 13, 2011 at 4:56 AM

    This was an icing on the cake! Sadism and love depicted in equal measure!! Great work, Aayushi!

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  9. ExpressNovember 13, 2011 at 9:08 AM

    How do you do this aayu? How?
    Take a topic as sensitive as this and make such a beautiful thing out of it! awesome stuff :)

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  10. Superrrnickkk...!!!!November 13, 2011 at 11:12 AM

    wow...!! nothing much is coming out. just WOW. Period. :)

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  11. Stuti DhyaniNovember 13, 2011 at 11:23 AM

    It killed me to read this!

    Wow!

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  12. RahulNovember 13, 2011 at 12:24 PM

    it's difficult not to like ur writings..:-)

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  13. FirstTimeMotherNovember 13, 2011 at 12:33 PM

    " Today.
    We merged.
    And parted.
    Perhaps, forever." the real dessert of your post... :)
    Like the way how a lover is killed.
    Simply awesome !

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  14. Amna SiddiquiNovember 13, 2011 at 4:06 PM

    Simple, and stunning. :)

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  15. UnknownNovember 13, 2011 at 4:37 PM

    I liked the flow of the poetry, but It shows the writer's pessimism in love.. She shouldn't be like that !

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  16. CяystalNovember 13, 2011 at 5:41 PM

    @ Priyanka,
    Ah! My purpose feels complete ..
    Thaanks re

    @ MSM,
    Thaaanks a lotttt! I really really like your current post btw. :)

    @ Serendipity,
    Now get your heart broken and start writing. :P

    @ Vinati,
    Nothing inspires like pain, they say.
    Thanks you, love. :)

    @ Lady Fiona,
    FINNNNNNY! Thanks a lot. Your comments are the brightest. :*

    @ Rahul jee,
    Thank you so much! I'm honoured!

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  17. CяystalNovember 13, 2011 at 5:44 PM

    @ Express,
    Imagination! That is IT. :D
    and you toh dont talk, you wrote such a beautiful piece yourself. :*

    @ Supernick,
    OMG! Thanks. :D

    @ Grain of sand,
    Oh God, that's quite a compliment. Thanks. :)

    @ Rahul,
    *bows down*

    @ Reicha,
    Those are my favourite lines. :)
    Thank you SO much!

    @ Amna,
    Thanks a lot . :)

    @ Fahad,
    Thanks.
    and it isn't pessimism or loss of belief in the concept of love, this work is an outcome of pure imagination.

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  18. Red HandedNovember 13, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    DEEP and Beautiful! So much pain and anger awesomely captured!!

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  19. AlcinaNovember 13, 2011 at 6:12 PM

    I did comment on the one which you deleted :P
    Sweet and pinching merger to be apart once again..the longing never ends it seems and it leaves fresh memories always..

    Hopefully it aint anything personal..

    And you tell me i write dark..then with this what about you? :)

    tc
    *hugs*

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  20. RichaNovember 13, 2011 at 8:16 PM

    how old are you again? ;)
    sorry for pestering you again :D
    YOU KNOW I LOU YOU :*

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  21. PhilO♥November 13, 2011 at 10:00 PM

    Cold and haunting!
    I'm in love with the picture :)

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  22. suvaibaNovember 13, 2011 at 10:44 PM

    write a proper comment on my post :X you fool.... ish...... chuddhu..!


    mmmm em in very zabardast hindi tareef types wala mood...! so bare the coming words....

    CHAUKUS.SUBHANALLAH.MASHALLAH.RAPCHIK>ITEM.MAAL


    aur picture to bilkul PALANGTOD ae :P

    :)
    waiting for a proper comment on my post..!

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  23. AnonymousNovember 14, 2011 at 12:01 AM

    Ah! No wonder Suvaiba and you are such great friends, and talented ones at that! How the hell do you manage to nail it every single time? And so well!!!!!

    Maar dala <3

    Sigh! for the photograph as I attempted a similar portrait and failed miserably.

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  24. CяystalNovember 14, 2011 at 3:54 PM

    @ Red,
    Thanks ree! :)

    @ Alcina,
    Oh! That got re posted, weirdly. :S
    and thanks a lot lot!
    This is fictitious, nothing like it happened and shan't happen either, inshallah!
    and I guess, the darkness connects our blogs ;)

    @ Richa,
    You know I louuuuu you too. Mwahhh!

    @ Philo,
    Deviantart! ahhh :D Too bad I can't take credit for the image. -__-

    @ Suvaiba,
    Bwahahaha. :D
    DHANYAWAAD!

    @ TBB,
    Aye haye! Thank you SO much, C. Love you. :*
    And oh, I loved this image the moment I saw it. Thou shalt succeed ! :D

    Thanks.

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  25. BonnieNovember 14, 2011 at 10:33 PM

    Gorgeous. I love the romance and the darkness that is present.


    http://www.glamkittenslitterbox.com/
    Twitter: @GlamKitten88

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  26. PsychsNovember 15, 2011 at 4:20 AM

    Wicked stuff oh talented one.. I love it.. passion, intensity, darkness, bring it on! I kept feeling like it belonged in a poetically edged European/ French underground drama.. You did it again selecting an amazing visual to go with the words.. its a stunning package deal.. a fantastic piece.. Best wishes Paul :))

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  27. AakritiNovember 15, 2011 at 10:43 AM

    maaf kardo mujhe pls???:(:(...I hardly get time to read nay blogs..really..anyway no excuses...as for this post..here it goes:
    dark.gothic. drugs- morphine, cocaine, heroin-all mixed up. complete high. senses losing, senses coming. masochism. love to destroy each other completely. This kinda reminds me one of ur earlier posts( guess it was urs or Ayushi...dunno..but i m confusing:P) it was abt a lover dying and giving his life for substance abuse! this is sad love..

    will read ur other posts soon..wokay?? khafa mat hona!!??

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  28. RiàNovember 15, 2011 at 3:29 PM

    That was surely dark...scary too!!

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  29. CяystalNovember 15, 2011 at 6:21 PM

    @ Bonnie,
    Thank you SO much. <3

    @ Paul,
    **European/ French underground drama.
    Jeez! Really? Haha I am flattered. Totally!
    Thanks a lot. :)

    @ Aakriti,
    Chalo maaf kiaa! :D
    And oh, college sounds really bad. :O
    and that was me. Its under the name "Dreaded D" and it is about substance abuse.
    Thanks ree.. nai nai, maaf kar dia gaya aapko :D

    @ Ria,
    :)

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  30. Misterio VidaNovember 15, 2011 at 6:29 PM

    wow...wonderful ... super duper hit...blockbuster :)

    sorry i missed your recent posts due to unavailablity of net :( ....

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  31. CяystalNovember 15, 2011 at 9:14 PM

    @ Israr,
    Arey thank you SO much.
    and not a problem, not at all :)

    @ MSM,
    EEEE :D
    You definitely made me ridiculously happy. :*

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  32. CяystalNovember 15, 2011 at 9:36 PM

    And I feel blessed to be around such people. Though it was a minuscule mention, it made me insanely happy. Gee. Lots of love.*tight bear hug*

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  33. the other side of meNovember 16, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    Okay,now i can never write something like this..:) very deep one and where do you the inspirations from? tell me tell me

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  34. CяystalNovember 19, 2011 at 12:02 PM

    @ MSM,
    Ain't you the cutest? and I have felt that pull for a few bloggers too. I am SO glad you're part of the few now. :* And you can always write a page on me ;)
    And don't you worry, my comment forum is a bit of a chat forum. People do talk here, MUCHHHH! :D
    Mwahh

    @ TOSM,
    ofcourse you can. Just what you're worth. :*
    And the inspiration is drawn from the awesome people around me, like you. :D

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  35. MenacheryNovember 23, 2011 at 5:36 PM

    That was love and hate together in one go, and they were just sop perfect together, dnt seem out of place at all .. awesome poem, one helluva good read..

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  36. CяystalNovember 23, 2011 at 5:52 PM

    Thank you for leaving so many lovely comments, Menachery ! Its super nice of you. :D Much love. Thank you!

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  37. ashokNovember 24, 2011 at 2:13 PM

    intense yet smooth...well written!

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  38. GossamerDiariesNovember 25, 2011 at 9:54 PM

    Need i say i love it?! It ran in my head like a symphony and i love the paradoxes you use :) mmwah!

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