She walks with pomp.
Dances with grace. With finesse.
She has glimmer in her eyes.
Fuchsia on her lips.
Rose blush on her cheeks.
Sweet as sugar.
She is poetry in motion.
Inside, she is broken.
Weeps in silent sobs. In convulsive sobs.
She has thorns in her heart.
Gray on her mind.
Deep blue woes in her eyes.
Dark as midnight.
She is a forgotten dream.
She is the same person, and yet she is not.
47 comments:
ahhh the female version of sad clown.....the broken beauty...:-) lovely...
THIS IS SO WONDERFUL!!!
PERFECTION!
I mean it is depressive in the sense of a broken woman, a fake smile and being a 'forgotten dream' but from a reader's point of view, this is INCREDIBLE!
"She is a poetry in motion"
"She is a forgotten dream"
beautiful line; a melancholic masquerade...
But the label "the girl that i was" disturbs me..I hope everything is good!
I don't think any of the options for the new blog name describes your blog well...:-( sorry..
two sides of the girl's life,somehow evryone have their two sides.. one that's visible another one hidden,
she is the same person,and yet she is not
Hugs,now you dont change please..
What beautiful piece of work.
You are awesome. Bohat awesome.
Very beautiful :)
Oh, beautiful! :) :D
hum sab hain :)
A poignant weave!
this just added up to my mood swing :O
I loved it :)
Well written!
:D
Story of most of the women?
I kind if feels so....
you are damn good with words crystal! nice write up ..
I somehow though of the movie 'Fashion' and supermodels when I read this.
Cold hard truth served in beautifully crafted words, what more can a connoisseur ask for:)
I've been missing you and your posts, my precious ~*SD*~ :) ♥
There is such beauty to be written in darkness and you have woven a gorgeous tapestry here :)
My favorite lines echo @a grain of sand ~ this should be of no surprise to her :D
"She is the same person, and yet she is not."
Very profound and excellent ending!
:) ♥
P.S. ~ I love how you portrayed both sides of the mask ~ brilliant!
everyone has those two sides right... how ironical.. beautiful :)
like you said that day,
an individual has many facets and some are best when hidden
i think the sad one should
yeah its KHOOOOOBSOOORAT
like i say and you feel..! :)
AND THE PIC IS KILLER :)
<3
Beautiful descriptions! Such a contrast. Loved it :)
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You really need to know that you weave words in a superb manner. Needless to say, I liked the poetry a lot.
=)
Your words effortlessly manage to raise the hair up my spine..
It makes me realise how such a girl exists in all of us..
Who smiles when she's broken, who laughs.. when all that she wants to do is hide under a blanket and cry..
I loved the poetry:)
where the hell did crystal disappear?????:-O does anyone have any clue...?????
The mask we wear before the world!
Great lines!
Thanks a lot of a lot, guys. Sorry, I haven't been around because of my insane internet connection. This was a scheduled post anyway :S
@ Grain of sand,
Don't you worry, hon. The tag says "The girl I was" not I am .. :)
Its a long-gone phase. Thanks for the concern though. It matters. <3
and PK and Chintan and all those who thought almost everyone woman has some phases of the kind, i guess you're right. Its a possibility! :)
This. Is. So. Beautiful. <3
Again, the last line.. awesome! The comparison, amazing and ask me how! But the last line, it rings in your head a little longer than usual and that is when you know, what you just read..and i went through it again :):)
...every poetry is one day a forgotten dream...
i'm glad to find you active and in a 'writey' mood once again. its been a while since i've read your words. :)
Excellent write, and describing both sides of the story in so few words with an awesome image.. perfect.. keep those posts coming :))
This is so beautiful.:)
Have a good day.
@ Shagun,
Thanks a lottt re :)
@ Priyanka,
Guess this one came naturally.
Thank you so muchhh <3
@ Nachi,
I didn't even know you still blogged. Shall ping you in a while! Take care bud :)
and, thanks.
@ Paul,
Thank you thank you! Image credits always go to Deviantart!
@ Izdiher,
Thank you, hon! You have a great week ahead ..
Conflict...Conflict..
I think..it is very difficult to be the same inside and outside in today's world...there is always some corner which is unseen..which only resides inside....
But, both the sides are part of us..which makes us who we are :)
Inspired by Lady Fiona's poem..is it? :)
Best Wishes.
Hmm...something that we go thru i wud say.
Haha no. I wasn't inspired by them :) I just wrote it :D
beautiful lines
but y do they all have sad endings
@ Kunal,
This was a scheduled post. So , guess not. :)
and yea, the two sides exist right inside us and create havoc on occasions too.
@ Ria,
Hmmm, guess.
@ Philo,
Hahaha okaay :D
@ Moi,
Read the last one. It doesn't. :D
and thanks!
and he stared in her eyes beyond that glimmer
to see in heart, caress her in sob
to say she is THE one, he could take all that
to see that blue poetry with with that forgotten gray strand...
i love the expression.. the contrasts sketched are so apt and are put together so damn well !!
Such simple words to express such depth! I'm sure most of the girls can relate to this. Loved it! :)
Shamia, Nikita,
Thanks a lot lot guys. :)
Do not let others to make you a 'forgotten dream'.
Fight for yourself and for others' honor.
I've always had this strange wish of going to the masquerade ball and kissing my guy at midnight there :*
Your words are magic Crystal :) sheer magic :)
almost reminds me of Byron.
There is such a melancholy tone to this poem yet so beautifully stirring.. simple choice of words that deeply spoke in bounds! Great work! :)
Thank you Dee!
And The Privy Lotus, God, what a HUGE compliment.
Serendipity, Filmy but so lovely ha! :D I wish it comes true. :* Thanks lovey.
Fahad, Easier said than done. Fighting can be the toughest on occasions.
This is intense! Very! :) Brilliant work :)
Thank you SO much, Greeshma. :)
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