I like how the breeze feels today. The way it softly caresses my cheeks. Its not moist, not too dry, just how I like it. I think its playing with my hair, just the way you do.
We're miles apart, but today I feel closer to you. Kind of schizophrenic, eh?
No one to share the blanket with is a little awkward though, for obvious reasons. But its okay, the melody you composed two days back is still thrumming in my head. It makes my insides swing to and fro, just as they did 50 hours back when you sang it to me in that deep baritone. Bliss. And oh, sorry for counting the hours since you've been away. Its not a typically me habit, I know.
I like the mint cushions a little today. I thought they were pretty ugly when you got them but I guess no head resting on them adds to the appeal. You know what I mean, no?
The night is still young, and the clouds are thin. Clear night sky, just as we love it. Just that there isn't that insomniac to talk it through tonight.
When I am with you, we stay up all night.
When you are not here, I can't go to sleep.
Praise God for these two insomnias.
And the difference between them.
~Rumi
There are in numerous patches of colors revolving in my brain after the weed. When I think of you, the patch incessantly changes to red. How not surprising.
I feel light-headed but insanely beautiful. If you'd tell me the stars shined for me today, I would believe you.
46 comments:
Wow ...amazing text.It is always pleasure to read your posts.
God bless you .
What a beautiful post. It feels like a poem.
Oh, the emotions. I love this! :D Beautiful! Blessed Be! :)
Beautiful. Very. :)
Ah! I am going thru this. Insomnia of the second kind is haunting me .. SIGH!
You just wrote my heart down
Lovely!
owh..I tell you darling..this is really a romantic piece and i love the way your words flow..lovely really :)
and I love Rumi
and these lines makes me awwwww..''If you'd tell me the stars shined for me today, I would believe you''
Just that there isn't that insomniac to talk it through tonight. If you'd tell me the stars shined for me today, I would believe you.
Your posts take my breath away, lady.
I.love.that.quote. Then again, it's Rumi we are talking about. Such an emotional post. I like it. :)
Beautiful! :)
Nights are dark but they have a spark :)
I like the lines from Rumi too.
Beautiful read !!
good god, the last verse was amazing...the blanket, the pillows, the finer details <3 it all...
aah this post was like a breath of fresh air! :)
yeah yeah no em commenting :P
frog and the Nightingale
awwwwwwwwwww i think this is more than a khoobsoorat post its more on the romantic side .... i love the the tiny little details you have poured in like the counting of the hours :)
i pyar karta hu this post :P
pardon my language.! :)
<3 tc
happy weeding...:-)
I just came back home with swollen eyes after seeing off this really special friend who went to some other city for studies.
I don't know if I can relate anymore than this to your post :)
Sometimes I feel you post just for me to smile (like the previous post of yours:) ) and sometimes your text is something that comes the closest to the voices in my mind.. in my heart:)
The picture.. Your writing, this post.. Just Amazing!
I'm in love with the way you write :) It's captivating! :)
Oh sweet Lord :) I love you more and more with each passing day :)
And don't you tell me again that you're not a romantic ;)
You just nailed it with the last two lines! *hugs*
LOve you :) :)
One word,Beautiful.
Ah beautiful portrayal of emotions, simply superb.
The weeding always causes us to see red, that's the whole fun about it. And yes, not surprising at all.
"There are in numerous patches of colors revolving in my brain after the weed. When I think of you, the patch incessantly changes to red. How not surprising.
I feel light-headed but insanely beautiful. If you'd tell me the stars shined for me today, I would believe you."
it amazes me how easily I can relate with these lines..Beautiful read straight from your heart to my heart!:-)
"I feel light-headed but insanely beautiful. If you'd tell me the stars shined for me today, I would believe you." L♥VE!!!
You are a closet romantic :P One day you'll come out and confess it even though your words already undress it ~ hey that sounds like a cool kinda quote? ©2011FinnyFrases ;))
I was swept away with the sheer, breezy fabric in the image and the brilliant *beauty* of your flawless flowing words! Fantabulous once more! Muahh! :)
P.S. ~ Love Rumi too and also Gibran!
Most of this post had me awwing and blushing at myself :P
but the love that you have managed to put across via this post is prolly the reason for that. Good one, this.
and you quoted Rumi! Thats 'aww' all over again! :P
Beautiful :')
"I feel light-headed but insanely beautiful. If you'd tell me the stars shined for me today, I would believe you."
^major love. <3
When I am with you, we stay up all night.
When you are not here, I can't go to sleep.
So well written!
simply fabulous :)
I seriously dowbt your age Aayu :D You are a magician when it comes to words. Love!!
@ Izdiher,
And its a pleasure to have you read me. :)
Thank you so much.
@ Cricketfreak,
Gee. I was thinking of writing one I guess.
Thanks! :)
@ Mystical Skeptical me,
Aww! Welcome here and thank you SO much. :D
@ Anu,
Thanks a lot of a lot. :D
@ Red Handed,
I did? Oh yay, I did. Thanks a lot, lovey. :)
@ TOSM,
I admire Rumi. Gibran and Rumi could be poster-men for idealistic writers in my world. They're gorgeous.
Thank you SO much, love. <3
@ Ezazi,
And your cuteness takes away mine. thank you SO much. <3
@ Khadeeja,
Exactly. Its Rumi, at the end of the day. <3 Thank you SOO much.
@ Vinati,
:)
@ Reicha,
Guess we all agree he's a magician now. :D
@ TBB,
Got a knack for detailing, you know. Hehe :D
Thank you SO much, sweetheart.
@ Ria,
Glaaad you felt so! and welcome back hon.
@ Suvaiba,
Aap mantal hai. Mantal garl. :P Mujhse kamm, but still khwaaeet mantal! :D
And I know. Baritone reminded you of that stupid Vikram Seth poem! *shakes head in dismay*
Just got reminded of this : Dekh tere sansaar ki haalat kya ho gayi bhagwaan, kitna badal gaya insaan.
Hahaha. and no, i didn't have grass today :D
@ Rahul,
Haha. You wish. :)
@ Priyanka,
Oh where? is she close by?
and the intention of all the posts is always to have you awesome people leave with a huge smile on your phacees :D haha.
Lots of love to you.
@ Philo,
So is yours re. :)
You're TOO sweet. Thanks a zillion times.
@ Serendipity,
Its been a mutual feeling. Ever since. :D
xx
Thank you SO much.
And seriously, I am not a romantic. :)
@ Priyanka,
I love you toooo, Preeee! *supertight hug*
BTW, you still didn't get the FB message ? :S
@ HBL,
Thank you. :)
@ Soumya,
Weeding? Haha. No, I guess, they give me tons of hues. When I think of him, its always red. :)
Thank you SO much.
@ Mishi,
Awww! Your comments always make me elated. :) I wish you'd post reallllllly soon! Love.
@ Finny,
FinnyFrases sounds like the awesomest thing you could start , eh ? When you're totally jaded and tired of your job, do start business there ;)
AND, I guess I'm not a romantic at all. Yes, a closet romantic maybe. Still can't absorb being called one though. My friends would shudder at me being called one. :D
You are the kindest, sweetest, loveliest! I mean it.
LOTS of love.
@ Express,
You're the most aww worthy thing I know baby! Love you tonnes tonnes :D
@ Ishiyeta,
Hehe! I loved the fact that you loved this :) Gratias!
@ Rahul jee,
Thank you thank you! :)
@ Shama,
:)
@ Richa,
Don't, don't, don't. :O
And I love you SO much. (: Thanks.
lovely post, you have a great way with words and writing!
ahh well it's a 'he' not a 'she' :P
and no he isn't anywhere nearby..
He went to Melbourne, Australia..
Beautiful post. Nice read :) Loved the way you wrote.
http://www.iredeem.blogspot.com/
Wow, it's so beautiful :)
Why don't u write a novel or something like that??? I'd love to read it :)
Cяystal, what can i say. It flows like a subtle stream in the most delicate of valleys. I just love your use of images, very impressive. Looking forward to reading your next installment.
Paul Pauls Poetic Sauce
Thank you! :D You shall see me more often, I am heart-ing your blog, especially the Pentagram! :D :D :D
lots and lots of love... im lost of words......
hats off again and again and again......
pyaar ishq aur mohobbat..
The way you weaved the longing through night and awake memories which were not long before crafted leaves me mesmerized and dreaming..beautiful my dear!
..Utterly romantic..
<3
tc!
This is so mystically mesmerizing!
I love how you write, woman! <3
beautifully written. I love the photograph too :-)
Where else does the 'crystal' live except blogger?
You are 'too' 'too' sweet :D
Thank you for your comment :) I don't really know about true love either.. But parents love is definitely true :)
Beautifully written:) I love the last three lines :P
PS- Your post reminded me of *someone* and the Coldplay song, yellow. So imma call *someone* and sing it right now.
PS- I like the pic;)
@ Pop,
Thanks a lot. :)
@ Priyanka,
Oohhh! That's crappy. :(
Tc. Be good.
@ Shreya,
Thanks so muchhh!
@ Aliza,
Wow . .should I? I don't want to bug people yaa .. what'd happen of them? :P
@ Paul,
Elated! :)
@ MSM,
Awww ! What do you mean by esp the Pentagram though? :O
@ Kharren,
You're THE best. Thanks. :)
@ Alcina,
WHOAAAAAAA. Thanks a tonnnnn.
@ Shagun,
and I love you. Thanks :)
@ Raaji,
Deviantart! :)
Thanks.
@ Iffi,
Lucknow, India :)
@ Philo,
Haha :D
@ Aishwarya,
Yellow, right? I know :D
and please dooo .. he's going to be super happy xD God bless.
Love, all!
Pentagram represents all the Five elements of Nature. :D Hence, I love it. :D
UFFFF...!
There you go. I never say that.
But I want to say one more thing. God bless you for writing such powerful stuff. I envy such great people.
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