10/11/11

I have only ..


I am not a liar, I have only hidden many truths.
I am not scared from my past, it only bears too many scars.
I don't hate the rain, I only cannot control my tears then.
I haven't been in love, I have only lost him.
I haven't been a ditcher, I have only left a friend's hand.
I am not scared of screaming, I have only lost my voice.
I have not a committed a sin, only seen too many and kept mum.
I have never felt for him again, I have only missed his presence in my life.
I haven't abandoned vibrant colors, I have only taken up the ones that are unassuming.
I haven't separated from the crowd, I have only started being scared of addressing it.
I haven't given anyone hatred, I have only received abhorrence time and again.
I still stop to smell the flowers, I have only stopped devouring their beauty now.
I haven't been two faced, I have only deserted the ugly.
I didn't want to be a complicated, I have only lost the simplicity.
I don't believe in paradoxes, I have only fallen in love with them, again!



43 comments:

  1. this is sooo beautiful! we'd all find a part of us here and there.. im so so happy Fara asked me to read your blog :D you my love are a gem! i dont know anyone quite at vibrant, funloving insane and cute as you. remain the same and only grow more beautiful! * i know this is too sweet a comment to be written by me, but well, take it ;)

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  2. Nice piece of art..makes me to write something like this too :)

    I have never felt for him again, I have only missed his presence in my life.
    Loved these lines the most

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  3. @ Tariq,
    Uf! Out of all people amongst a population of 1.2 billion, look WHO comments on my blog. :D
    And yes yes, your sister is a smartass, unlike you ;) And YESSSS, you don't have to be good to me. Doesn't suit you bro. Not at all bro. Haha :D I love you my Kashmiri chuhaaa. Your comment made me all ":D" like you do otherwise when you're around. :D

    @ OSOM ,
    Please do! :D Would love to read.
    And, love lost is beautiful love too. Sigh :)

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  4. If I tried to make a Picture while reading this - The result will be a Mango.
    and Mangoes are Lovely :P.

    So this is Lovely. May be Someday I will be able to write like this. Someday..(in 2030 - TEEHE).


    oh I have a RHYME!!!.


    I am scared of doing......stuff.
    And I'm not afraid of fish - In fact I like Dolphins.

    .
    Welcome Back @_@ I didn't miss ya.

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  5. I am going to share this on my Facebook wall!
    I am just soooo awed by these lines!
    Paradoxial life!

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  6. I love it. I really, really do.

    http://www.glamkittenslitterbox.com/
    Twitter: @GlamKitten88

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  7. why a disclaimer in the end? do you care if someone interprets this piece as a state of mind?

    i liked the verses, but the disclaimer totally killed it....

    #_#
    The Blunt Blog

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  8. i dont judge people according to their posts,
    I just run out of words when I read some excellent work.

    :D ok i suck at this.
    but i love u.
    so lets call it even :P

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  9. Oh My God! This is one brilliant piece of work. Every single is so, so beautiful!
    Amazing!

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  10. Finny missed you!!! WoW! This is *brilliant*!!! I've read it several times now because it's soooo good and I wish to absorb all of it's contents. The last line ties it all together! Absolutely LOVED every line! You're AhhhMAZING and I'm missin' your face from my Google friend connect :( Sending you love & *hugs* ♥ ♥ P.S. ~ Agree with everything Tariq said about you :-)

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  11. @ Daniyal,
    Because of your love for mangoes that Suvaiba and I have noticed, I hence christen you Mangiyal! :) Hello, Mangiyal, I wish you write a mangolicious post soon so that people go mangoes after reading it because it will be mangofreakingly awesome. :D And don't you fret, Mangiyal, the-one-who-gave-you-the-name didn't miss you either. But haaayyy, i will throw mangoes at you rather than blowing kisses now. Bye bye, Mangiyal :)

    @ Red-Handed,
    Ahhhhhh! That will be a treat. Thanks a ton ton ton. Love.

    @ Bonnie,
    Thank you SO muchhhh hun!

    @ TheBluntBlogger,
    Yes I do. I get flooded with mails and comments about how I should take care and how I should take things calmly and I DO NOT want those even though they only mark concern. Its just a piece of art and that's all all it is. :)
    I know! I kind of understand whatever you mean .. Thank you anyway!

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  12. @ Express,
    Yaay yaaay old blaagger frands are the BEST on Planet Earth! :*
    *flying kisses*

    @ Ovais,
    Glad.you.thought.I.can! :D
    Yes, more later. Got two papers left!

    @ Anuranjini,
    Yay. Thank you thank you :)

    @ Lady Fiona,
    Crystal missed Finny too. Rather, Crissie missed Finny too ! :*
    I am rather glad glad you thought it was worth being absorbed.
    And oh, you do? :( I shall change it to my fugly little face soon love.
    Mwahhhh! :*

    @ Rahul,
    Thank you, Sir. :)

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  13. Thats a good one to let us all know how to take a positive view of things :)

    have a nice day...

    Arv.

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  14. eh. I'm going to kill Mangoes from now on then.
    And I think I won't post anywhere in near future. @_@ I don't feel good. may be some other day.

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  15. @Arv,
    Having you back is amazing :D
    and geez, thank you.

    You have a great day too, bud.

    @ Daniyal,
    Did i out-wit you rather out-mango you today? Hahaha.
    Write soon, Mangiyal. Tc.

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  16. i was enjoying reading this until you said dont see it as a state of mind :(

    nice work girl...keep it up :) i wish you get 7.2billions comments on this (i dont know what is the limit on blogger)

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  17. lovely !!!!
    =)
    post more often- l;ove radin your work, awesome =)

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  18. This is beautiful ,Fatima.


    And thanks for your lovely comment .It means a lot to me.

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  19. I have shared it on Fb page.hope you wont mind!:) it was beautiful..!

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  20. @ Israr,
    Well .. :)
    and whoa, I didn't know that many comments EXIST for real. :P
    Thank you thank you!

    @ Fatima,
    I will love. Got exams on right now! :@
    Thanks a lot lot.

    @ Izdiher,
    You sure you made the comment on the right blog? My name is Aayushi :D
    And thanks.

    @ Mishi,
    Ofcourse I don't, its more of an honour gee :)
    Thank you SO much!

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  21. tht was a beautiful read! and its hard to view this only as a piece of art - the words are too deep to be creative :)

    i like the photograph used.

    suggestion: try and give more space to ur words and less for the background. The violet checks are some how distracting the attention.

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  22. Yes i totally agree with Chintan...the disclaimer wasnt needed at all.

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  23. @ Sawan,
    Thank you, thank you SO much, bud.
    Its always good to be back.
    And oh, I shall work on the background.

    @ Ria,
    It isn't a state of mind, you know? No depression, aggression, denial that's stemming inside me. But since you two say so, I shall look into that.

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  24. An intelligent, thoughtful-provoking and wonderful piece of writing! Very well done :o)

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  25. Girl, I loved it. Beautifully written.
    Tum bahut acha likhti ho sakhi.. :)

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  26. @ Deborah,

    Thank you! When it comes from a good writer, it means a lot! :]

    @ Vinati,
    Jee shukriya, sakhi. <3 :]

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  27. Crystallll! :D
    This is so well written, and just so true! :)

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  28. hai dear, well just read ur msg in my blog, just like ur poem, I write the below lines:
    I read your blog often,its just I don't comment.

    but shall see to that, I would comment in future. :)

    No hard feelings, All smiles and yes liked two lines a lot from this poem "I am not scared of my past, it only bears too many scars". And
    "I didnt want to be a complicated, I have only lost the simplicity".

    Very Nice And I think it can still have more lines.t.c cya and keep blogging and commenting as well.luv u.

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  29. @ Shagun,
    SHANGUNNN thanks :D
    Thanks for following too. :]

    @ Moi,
    Aye comments don't matter, just post a little oftener on your blog too. That would be nice :]
    and thanks a lot! Love you too hun.

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  30. and now when i read it again w/o disclaimer, it has so much meaning <3

    love!

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  31. those contrasting statements in each line.... Brilliantly written.
    Clearly depicting the complexity with which our life is woven !!

    Lovely read crystal !!

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  32. @ Chintan,
    Yaay thanks. :)
    Much love to you too.

    @ Jyoti,
    Indeed paradoxes are embedded in some parts of our lives.
    Gratias, miss. Keep writing.

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  33. yeyeiiii...! :)) mai kya likhooooooooooooooooooooo???
    KHooooooooooooooooobsoooooooooooooorat..........1 :)
    haaan ye sai ae...! :)
    biscut khaaaya kya?? :P
    lolz mmmm i knw this is turning out 2 b a gross n weird comment but thats okay..! :)
    tum hi to ho meri Chudhdhu..! :P

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  34. 'I am not a liar, I have only hidden many truths' - Yeah, more than hiding truths from others, we hide truths from ourselves! Nicely written, BTW.

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  35. This is so beautiful. This one right here. Paradoxes. And excuses. It becomes difficult to detest this person in spite of everything that has been done at her hands..

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  36. I don't say its infinitly beautiful I only say it's a wild flower
    I don't say it was soulful, I'll only say it was eternity when it seemed an hour!

    terrific: m awed...

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  37. Suvaiba, How on Earth do you comment? :/ But thanks so much, idiot. :P

    Zeba, True true.

    Grain of sand, Aw! That's SO sweet.:)

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  38. You are remarkable. Not following you, would be a mistake :)

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  39. haha :D Suvaiba's comments are the best on my posts :) :D Here, she just adds on to the insanity :D and how I wish I still was on Facebook so that I could share this there and make it reach more people :)

    Awesome :)

    How come I never found you earlier ?

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