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She sat her window,gazing at the clouds passing by, when a deep voice took her by surprise.
"You feel better?", he innocently asked.
"Time's healing things, but the absence still lingers.", she vaguely spoke.
"Someone's presence can complete the absence of everyone. For me its you!", he confessed.
She felt some love rekindled and gently hugged him..
"Someone's presence can complete the absence of everyone"
ReplyDeleteSo true. My friends were a huge help by just being there at times when I needed them. :) Short, sweet and true :)
Awww!That was beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteyayayayay...for the first time I'm first :D
ReplyDeletesweet :)
ReplyDeletewowwwwwwwwwww beautiful. :)
ReplyDeleten yes i belive that there r some ppl whose presence can complete d absense of everything.
wowo beautiful..!!!
ReplyDeletekeep writing dear..!!!
beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteBeautiful.. so few were the words.. :) bt yes.. even blank spaces can speak.. just beautiful!
ReplyDeletenice lines there :D
ReplyDeleteHey.. Nice thought.. Well i have got something for you on my blog.. Do check it out.
ReplyDelete:-)
ReplyDeletethe vacuum filled by a yet another s presence :-)
hugzzz
intense very intense...
ReplyDeleteme likes it :)
Well written.
ReplyDelete:)
Loved that quote
Presence of someone can complete the absence of everyone else
:)
Beautiful
Well written.
ReplyDelete:)
Loved that quote
Presence of someone can complete the absence of everyone else
:)
Beautiful
wow!!!
ReplyDeletedat was so nice!!!
Hmm.
ReplyDeleteProfound. And I wd echo alll othr commnts that superseded mine here...
All the best and let the pen flowing for more... :)
tc.
saw rab ne bana di jodi... :)
ReplyDeleteits said that if its not good its not the end but noone tells that how long it takes to get better
ReplyDeleteawww so sweet :)
ReplyDeletecool, you're getting better at this. However, I prefer the longer ones :)
ReplyDeletevalentine bug is biting you too
ReplyDeleteWOW...
ReplyDeletenothin else...
just "WOW"
lovely dear... :-D
ReplyDeleteAlthough, i dont agree...!!
There are some people, whose absence cannot be filled by anyone else...atleast not in love..!!
beautifully dun...wish every1 cud have sum1 who cud say such lines to them "Someone's presence can complete the absence of everyone. For me its you!"...
ReplyDeletebtw...whts 55 fiction???
@ Smriti,
ReplyDelete:)
I'm glad someone understood that I was pointing towards friends. :)
Thankyou!
Gratias Sami!
ReplyDeleteGratias Sami!
ReplyDelete@ Smriti,
ReplyDeleteLoool..congo baby!
Thnkuu HP!
ReplyDelete@ Preeti,
ReplyDeleteYees dearie..there are people like that! :)
Thanks a lot,Yamini.
ReplyDeleteGratias Arv!
ReplyDelete@ Matangi,
ReplyDelete:)
Blanks speak volumes! :)
Welcome here n Gratias!
Thankoo Peter! :P
ReplyDelete@ Riya,
ReplyDeleteChecked.
Thanks a ton! :-)
:) Rat !
ReplyDeleteHugs
@ Phoenix,
ReplyDeleteThanks very much thanks! :)
you have got the power to express in few lines.. kudos girl!! :)
ReplyDeleteThanks Siddie.
ReplyDelete:)
Why the same comment two timeS?
ReplyDeleteYou too got my disease of no patience? :P
Thanks Pooja.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you appeciated it!
@ Indrajit,
ReplyDeleteThats kind.
:)
Gratias!
And thanks for "officially" following my blog =P
@ Mystique Wanderer,
ReplyDeleteDid :)
Didn't quite dislike it like loads of people ;)
@ The Poet Manque,
ReplyDeleteIt may take a decade..but it has to be a happy end..or we need to end the sad endings!
:))) Mayz
ReplyDelete@ Rakesh,
ReplyDeletelol..wookay!
@ Chriz,
ReplyDeletenooo..me is immune to it!
@ Leo,
ReplyDeleteAhhhn...thankyou! :)
@ Enchant,
ReplyDeleteThats true..but some bit of the absence STILL can be filled..
@ comfortably numb,
ReplyDeleteIts a fictionary story with 55 or less words!\
Thanks a lot bhai!
@ TPo,
ReplyDeleteThankks :)
oops...u did not read d post i guess!
ReplyDeletejust saw a pic...right??
Whoa! Thats so sweet...
ReplyDeleteawwww-lovely story.Keep on-I liked te earlier one too:)
that was sooooooooooooooooooo cute baby!! superb!! :)
ReplyDeleteLest I sound clichéd, I'll keep it with a simple - well done!
ReplyDelete:)
Peace.
Bhai wah!! "Someone's presence can complete the absence of everyone. For me its you!"
ReplyDeleteI never believed in this. I no longer believe the same way as I did before. Life's teaching me... day in and day out...
See you when I see you... :D
what if we don't have the controls in our hand or its like that we just can't
ReplyDeleteits just feels so close to my heart... those lines are so so true... "Someone's presence can complete the absence of everyone. For me its you!"
ReplyDeletehmmmmmmmmmmmmm... SIGH!!!
absence still lingers....nice lines... :)
ReplyDeleteHow thoughtful.
ReplyDelete*clap clap*
yeah very true.. just one presence is enough to fill up all the absence in life...
ReplyDeletebeautifully expressed !
it was beautiful sis :)...
ReplyDeleteurs..hemu..
wow!!! :)
ReplyDelete@ enchantinganki ,
ReplyDeleteYez..I did.
You mean there was a post too?
aww..crap! :(
@ Mithe,
ReplyDeleteThanku! :)
I really like 55-fictions now :D
Give it a try!
Thankooo Tin tin! :)))
ReplyDeleteGratias Kartz! :-)
ReplyDelete@ Praveen,
ReplyDeleteLife teacher us..till we're dead.
The learning process realllly doesn't end..so keep the mind straight and keep believing,observing,learning new things! :)
Cos life is nothing..but a mystery.
Cya!
@ The Poet,
ReplyDeleteWell then..you can snatch it away from the person who has it!
"Sometimes God forgets that he has to give something to us..its then when we have to snatch it away from him."
-ONATCC!
@ Heart n' Soul,
ReplyDeleteAaaaaaw! :(
Please don't be sad..and keep the smile firmly on your face.
We all love you naa!
Gratias Moi!
ReplyDelete@ Amjad,
ReplyDeleteHuh.
Thanks! *bows down!*
@ Charmed One!,
ReplyDelete:-)
Thankyou!
Gratias Hemzie!
ReplyDelete@ Richa,
ReplyDeleteWowwie :-)
Thankie!
if i could be blown away, it will have to be right now!
ReplyDeletewow.. i need someone to whisper the same words to me...
i do!
beautiful!
ReplyDelete**"Someone's presence can complete the absence of everyone. For me its you!"
thats true. Likewise, someone's absence can invalidate the presence of everyone else :)
It all depends on WHO's present/missing.
Keshi.
"Someone's presence can complete the absence of everyone". Very true.. I just love ur posts.. keep it up..
ReplyDeleteCheers
Randeep
Heh heh heh, being a polyglot helps. ;) And oy, that *bookworm* thingie was for people who see books and think only *bookworm* :D
ReplyDelete@ Seher's shenanigans,
ReplyDeleteHey girl!
Don't worry..you'll get someone saying that to you..soon...very soon!
Thnx!
@ Keshi,
ReplyDeleteYea,babe.
There are some people whose absence can never fulfilled by ANYONE's presence.
Gratias!
@ Randeep,
ReplyDeleteThats a really sweet compliment..and I do hope you're genuine widdit!
Gratias
this is a very simple and awesome post. Time as they say is the biggest healer, cliched but true.
ReplyDeletesomeone's presence can heal all the past wounds and make the world go round once again . That void just needs to be filled.
u in love???
ReplyDeletecute!! i luv happy endings :)
ReplyDeletelol
ReplyDeletethe more u resist the more it hurts
and in the end u realise that u just have to bear the pain
i was the one who kept the controls of his life in his own hands. thickest head u could ever imagine and now its just that i m just a lamer a mere puppet
lol
ReplyDeletethe more u resist the more it hurts
and in the end u realise that u just have to bear the pain
i was the one who kept the controls of his life in his own hands. thickest head u could ever imagine and now its just that i m just a lamer a mere puppet
wowwww..
ReplyDeletei'm gonna take to 55-fiction after that awwwwww-worthy piece :)
loveeee n hugs
awh!
ReplyDeletethis post reminds me of someone :)
loved it.
keep writing!