Striking.
Calm.
Peaceful.
The call from the minaret.
Our eyes meet.
We smile.
Its never condescending.
We smile.
Its never condescending.
Many a strangers.
Today, I know all of them.
Today, I know all of them.
For they all smile back.
I see him praying.
Alone. Solitary.
He is in black.
His face, has lines.
His face, tells me stories.
His face, tells me stories.
They say he is mad.
I think he plays on a different note.
I think he plays on a different note.
There are devotees.
Some complain.
Some seek blessings.
Some, like me, just stay.
Immerse in the divinity.
Perhaps, they too soak in it.
Soak in the serenity.
Yes, there's plenty.
Some complain.
Some seek blessings.
Some, like me, just stay.
Immerse in the divinity.
Perhaps, they too soak in it.
Soak in the serenity.
Yes, there's plenty.
Nomads, I see in abundance.
Here, they find solace.
Here, nobody shuns them.
I stand by the window.
There is music.
A lot of it.
The music of a city calling back at me.
A lot of it.
The music of a city calling back at me.
The music a city aches to play.
One not marred by fear.
One that is not full of gore.
One not marred by fear.
One that is not full of gore.
The sky is a sharp blue.
The women look more charming.
The men a little more august.
The men a little more august.
The children have but grown in innocence.
The surroundings are a beautiful blur.
A translucent, peaceful blur.
I see pigeons.
I see flights.
I see flights.
Of freedom, of liberty.
For once, no one is tied down.
For once, they all breathe the same air.
For once, they all breathe the same air.
@Jamia Masjid, Srinagar.
Beautifully Written. :')
ReplyDeleteif someone gets the depth of this one, this is an example of Literature.. its TOO freaking good. The flow of words is like a beautiful song! i feel teary eyed .. Kashmir <3
ReplyDeleteThank you so much, Daniyal and Shamia. Your comments are valuable. :)
ReplyDeleteand what about someone like me who does not comprehend poetry at all? :(
ReplyDeleteThis is hardly poetry, Israr, plus, you only need emotions to understand a piece of writing, nothing sho sha about it. All said and done, it only requires a pair of eyes to read and a heart/mind to comprehend :)
ReplyDeleteLovely words and vivid description!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Sir :)
ReplyDeleteAwesome one,, a move towards freedom, same air ,, really good.
ReplyDeleteThank you, thank you :) And welcome to my blog.
ReplyDeleteWhat brilliant imagery!! I imagined all of it in front of my eyes. Like I too have been there.
ReplyDelete"For once, they all breathe the same air."
WOW..
Excellent choti!!! :)
crys,
ReplyDeleteem in hurry so writing a very disgusting wala commnt
lyfs messed up
il call u and tell bt can't promise
blah and blah
read ya pending posts
felt bad fr D
say a HIE to him frm my syd..
cant cum on the net... and blah
i hope u can decipher my situation
mmmm jst posted some stuff coz of prior commitments.
____________dnt dig in for the real you...
just see your reflection and try and fall in love. ___________
and if i have to comment on thy rytng style em gonna say its superb..! :)
Wow. Beautifully written!
ReplyDeleteI love the emotions you brought out!!
The bad times aren't that bad after all. The silver lining is that is makes you write beautiful poetry :)
Lovely. So calm:) I thought its Jama Masjid in Delhi! ...kahin bhi ho...the serenity and tranquility speaks louder than voices and words, for it is nothing but to be felt!
ReplyDeletePS: U've been to Srinagar!!! How awesome can that be!!!:O!!!I've been wanting to go there since more than 10 years!!
wowwwwwww exquisite !!
ReplyDeletelova ya my lil girl :)
xx
wowwwwwww exquisite !!
ReplyDeletelova ya my lil girl :)
xx
You feel, and I love how you put it into words. :)
ReplyDeleteAbsolutely B E A U T I F U L ! ♥ !
ReplyDeleteStellar last line!!! :*
I LOVE when you write prose like this!
This is so deep and beautiful !
ReplyDelete@ Mirage,
ReplyDeleteYou MUST visit Kashmir. Its beaaaautiful. I have no words :')
And thank you :*
@ Suvaiba,
I'll call you. Can I? Hua kya? :O
And D is okay, nothing great.
Thanks re. :)
@ Happy Go Lucky,
Can't hang on to the sad days, can I? That wouldn't be fair.
Thank you so much. :)
@Aakriti,
I felt similar when I visited Jama Masjid . Its just that in Kashmir, I think everything becomes a little more gorgeous. Its quite a place.
You have to visit it. With me, maybe? :D
@ Shama,
ReplyDeleteThank you meri jaan. :*
@ Amna,
Thank you, thank you! :)
@ Finny,
I love it when you make those comments. <3
Thanks.
@ Izdiher,
Hello :) Haven't seen you since a while. Thank you.
Beautifully written! :)
ReplyDeleteYou know what your poetry makes me want to do? It makes me want to write some too. Perhaps a reply, perhaps some praise. Cause a prose reply to words weaved so magically seems a little annoying, a lot unworthy.
ReplyDeleteThus, if you will indulge me:
Beautiful, immensely.
She walked in,
The huge gates.
The gates, he knew,
Will always be open for him-
And not shut
When he needed
To be inside,
Enveloped in the warmth.
Warmth, he thought,
Of a stranger's smile:
The curve telling stories,
Defining,
the ghost of love,
The ghost of life, of loss.
Loss, he saw,
In those aquamarine eyes,
That, which then, met his.
Deja vu, familiarity-
The filling pleasure
Of unsaid tales,
Of unspoken love.
Love, he believed,
As she walked on-
And adjusting her hijab,
Walked on,
Not inside
But today, towards where he sat.
Scattered cuz just typed it out within 3 minutes. Let's connect out of the blogosphere, if you will.
EZAAAAZYEEEE. You're too good. This is worth some bucks considering its a 3 minute tale. Salute :D
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, I left you my mail id. Its on my profile too.
I do, I do: Thank you :)
CRYSTAAAAAAAAALLLLL. <3
ReplyDeleteI just adore your poetry. You know that, don't you? And I'm gonna post it on my facebook, share it around.
No wayy, it wasn't anything compared to what you penned.
I'll mail you. You're terrifically-awesomistically gorgeous, woman.
*bows*
Stunning poetic verses. :)
ReplyDeleteYou can write about anything and everything :)Your composition is just so beautiful.. I love reading your work..
ReplyDeleteEvery line tells a story :)
I loved this!
Merry Christmas :)
@ Ezazi,
ReplyDeletePlease do. Asap. :*
@ Khadeeja,
Thank youu. :)
@ Philo,
Thank you so much! I think you're a beautiful writer yourself. xx
And Merry Christmas to you too :*
I am so stupid.... :(
ReplyDeleteI am blank :(
Sounds beautiful though!
I can just imagine all of it.
ReplyDeleteLike, right in front of me.
Including what Ezazi wrote.
You two should start a new joint blog!
the way u express, Aayu, you are just amazing! i am glad i met you here.
ReplyDeleteAmazing. I'm going to give up writing and just spend my time reading.. You churn out your posts in an effortless fashion that continually reel in the reader. Fine piece of work.. again ;)
ReplyDelete@ Red,
ReplyDeleteAww :( Thanks though.
@ Ovais,
Wah. Thanks for the idea re, insha'Allah, aisa hoega ek din. :D
@ Sawan,
I am equally proud of knowing you :)
Thank youuuu.
@ Paul,
Paaaaaul, Where've you been?
Thank you so much! Finny and you make the best comments, ever. xox
And a very Merry Christmas to you. How's the day going ?
Crysty....sure..would love to..Any case I have thought that I have to visit this paradise on earth before I die...and then they say 2012 is here:P When are we going?;)
ReplyDeleteWow.. you blew me away with this one!! So ethereal and heavenly... the moment lingers on.. leaving a smile on my face and peace inside my soul!! Bravo!! :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing!!! Heavenly indeed!!!
ReplyDeleteBtw, here's something I wrote...check it out when you get the time.
http://hamzaziablogs.blogspot.com/2011/12/another-brick-in-wall-pt1.html?showComment=1325189478032#c5667617012518869396