The night I came back from Rina's wedding. Ayan was sleeping soundly..hence I lifted my pillow to find two green hair clips staring at me..I stood shocked as I recalled something my maid told me..
"I always take my hair clips out before sleeping, they give me a headache"
Jul 2, 2009
55 fiction : Untitled
Labels: and then I kept wondering, betrayal, weird
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:-(
55f is meant to be thrilling.n u'v done complete justice 2 it.
i bow b4 u,baby...
hot maid?
lol @ chriz
gud one grlie... though a cliche idea, the execution of it is perfecto
good one aayu :)
Good work....
hmm Ayan or Shiney Ahuja??
awesome write up!! :)
woah!
haha, shiney ahuja :p
ehhh deceit... i hate that side of humans
nicely done!
Ouch...
but seriously maid?? guys dont have taste at all
That pig !
N u get inspired 4m a high profile case:P
gud 2 c a post here gain after the last one stated u r bored of blogging:)
tc!!!
something's missing!! I saw a whole diff post earlier this day!! Or maybe not!!
5 lines and so much suspense and drama... waah bhai waah!! :D
See you when I see you... :D
stupid guy...
nice one mate...
Naaaiiiicee one....
*claps*
:)
ayee.. good.. Shiney Ahuja kinds haan? ;)
oh my my..
thts so sad..
by d way gud one like all
others.. :)
eing? ..Shiney Ahuja Inspired? :P
but aisa bhi ho sakta hain naa ki she may have kept that NOT before "sleeping" :P
Aisa hain ..Main gandaa nahin soch saktaa :D :D
and also..Why would the bai tell her malkin something like that :P :P ??
Kya baat hai...
Stunning as always..
And lol @ the Shiney joke.. :D
yeyy ur bak! I was quite sad yday to read ur last post which u hv deleted now. Im glad, infact v glad that ur bak :)
Lovely piece here...INFIDELTY written all over it...o nos!
Keshi.
ah, shiney oh shiny shiney ahuja!
but, green clips, eww..
and you? awesome :)
@ Smita,
No no. Its cynical! xD
Don't be sad.
@ Anwesa,
Thankyou so much.
Bt the lazy me can only write proper 55fs..tooo lethargic to write something slightly bigger. =D
@ Chriz,
Definitely.
Want her phone no. ?
@ D Gypsy,
Call Ahuja my inspiration xD..
thanks!
Thankyou, Preeti.
Funny that you call it goood..its cynical! =D
@ Shwetha,
Gee..thanks =D
@ Richa,
Whoever you prefer,gurlie. =D
Thanko.
@ Orange,
Yes. Ahuja, veyr much xD
@ Sunshine,
Dark sides!
Thnx.
@ The Rat,
Some guys DEFINITElY don't.=)
@ Hp,
AGREE!
@ Cn,
I grow cynical and post random bullshit. You know I don't mean half the things I say :D.. and yea, I always liked Shiney Ahuja's acting skills in Gangster..so typically.. I got inspired =P
@ Pranav,
Ho hoyyeee! Long time tht I saw you! :D..where's your blog gone?
And yes, I wrote random stuff yesterday. Forget it!
@ Arv,
The world is indeed full of stupid ppl..he had better choices..bt whatever! :D..thanks.
@ Mads,
Not worth claps..its so pagal..
anyway..thnku ji
@ Shruti,
OMG! When did you come back? :)
Yes. Very much Shiney Ahuja. Gosh, that guy's become over-famous :D
@ Sahityika,
Thanks a lot! :)
@ Anurag,
Haan haan..kyu nahi..you're so like doodh ka dhula hua..throughly washed n stuff =P
dekho..bas accept the story..logic mat dhoondho! :D..crappy it is, logic mat nikaal!
@ Anurag,
You dunno meri bhai..bais are chtterboxes..(majority)..:D
@ Shruti,
Ahuja is my inspiration ;)
Thnku!
@ Keshi,
I grow cynical and write nonsense...don't believe it..okay? :D
and yes, Infidels! PHBT!
@ Express,
I lked Shiney in Gangster, theek hai? ..mazaak mat udao uska! :D
Green clips? Pehle red likha tha..bt wuzn satisfied..
You know naa..maids ka taste..;)
Blame it on my vegetating mind, but I dont think I understand this !
Help me, wouldja ?
@ Cindi,
Sure.
This girl returns from a friend's wedding, and she finds her hubby sleeping peacefully..she decides not to wake him up, and after changing her clothes she picks up her pillow fr settling it, and finds two clips under the pillow.
She recalls an incident when her made told her that she always slept after taking out her hair clips. SO the conclusion is that the woman finds out her hubby slept with their maid.
Okay?
dunno y the hair clip reminds me of shiney :P
@ Priya,
Yea? =P
Weird..
Ahuja is my inspiration ;)
:(
@ Amal,
Its Cynical. Dun be sad.
hahah :) :P good one!
really well written! :)
^ Hehe. Thankyou! =)
uhhh ohhh!!! poor wife.. :-(
u write 55 fiction vry well,, Crystal.. i've read quite a few at ur space now.. :-) gr88 going,, girl.. :-)
OH
MY
GODDDDDDDDDD
!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
its like uaka pati sirf mera hai :P
Ha ha, Ahuja, yes! :D Send this to the print.
Good one, mate!
Peace.
Thankyou so much Muzeeerr! :-)
@ Harini,
:D..
Thnx !
@ Kartz,
If Shiney Winey reads this, he'll sue me! :D
Thanksss!
wooo!! well written :)
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