~ You want me to attain Nirvana,
A bliss from the world's odds and blacks,
But how do you suppose me to do that?
Its your love that ties me back ~
A bliss from the world's odds and blacks,
But how do you suppose me to do that?
Its your love that ties me back ~
79 comments:
oh ya no Nirvana and all for you..
stay human , stay loved :D i love this silver gray background for your blogpost area.. :) superbness!! :)
ahhh awaitin freedom eh yet d wordly shackles of emotions holdin ya back...
d story of life...of human nature...so well expressed in so few words...*claps*
Thanks a mammoth for such kind words for me!
hehehe!
Great message thr ....4 lines but leaves a much bigger impact...Well done ...Kudos :)
gr8 thought
how about comtinuing iy this way
a touch to set the soul alive
to give the profound bliss
ur love to fill the eternal void
freedom by tender kiss
Very powerful lines... and matured portrayal of Nirvana,..
My view-
'Your love' - is it indicating the love towrds God?
When u merge with the Beloved Almighty, transcending all boundaries so much so tht u and ur Beloved God is one, whr none but pure Love exists, I think tht is whr Nirvana begins...Unconditioned.. tht is whr the absolute state of Immortalisd Bliss arised and merges dissolving the boundaries betwn the Lovers (Lovers means the female and her Beloved i.e God- A Sufi concept)......
Love wil not always be tying back in Nirvana. It leads to that Utopian state...
Another view---
It can be a state of mind, which one can achieve even in love betw 2 mortals.
Tc... n keep penning.. :)
P.S
Arise shd be the word above not arised..
Typo ;; :p
Aayushi that was BEAUTIFUL to say the very least... okay so i started reading it... you know the rhythm of poems always intrigues me... and by the time i ended i was like ... "wow!"
*hugs*
you're so talented mashAllah :)
was just reading ur blog name list
half of them,it seems to me are alrdy been taken and i wanna ask, why do u actually wanna change it?
this four liner is well done,but I usually think nirvana is another form of love and love of nir...unless u mean weed..hah!
baibeh!!! that's superb piece..ahhhhh i want nirvana too! :)
firstly...nice template..!!!
nice piece of work....simple yet great lines..!!!
aa there you go..love again at odds... phew!!
me likes the template...
mannnnnn. wuts happening??? exams done and i was expecting all brightened up u.. dnt think too much.. the way of life would make you realize the answer. hope to cya online some day soon. u take care.
and nice words!
But If somebody loves you, why would he want you to attain Nirvana???
ty for ur recent comment in my blog Crystal :). HUGS!
However I dun think I'll blog again sweetie..not the same way anyways. Cos, something died in me...and my Instincts told me that Im done in Blogville. And I never go against my Instincts. Besides, i do what I WANT to do..not what I HAVE to do. And right now, I dun wanna blog. I hope u u'stand. Cos alot of ppl were disappointed, called me this n that, judged my decisions from their point of view, made me feel like I was not worth knowing after all. All the good times we've had in blogville suddenly seemed nothing to them. That really baffles me tho.
But I know u wud u'stand what Im trying to say. Hopefully. :) If I ever blog again, u wud be one of the first to know. Always know u made a huge difference in my life thru ur posts and ur genuine friendship. Just cos I stopped blogging it doesnt mean our friendship stopped too, altho some ppl seem to think that way...and hv altogether stopped 'knowing' me.
See u when i see u next then. MWAH and all the best!
Keshi.
oi... ain't Love is the one that helps u attain Nirvana, bliss and felicity..hmmm???
hugzzz
oye betoo...tumhari umar nirvana k liye nhi bani hai dumbo :P
but u wrote it beautiful ...
I loved the flow and the theme and the ending...gosh I have a deep suspicion that my baby is in love :P
isn't so ???
Whoa!! New template, new blogs..badhiya hai :)
Par topic thoda sa grim grim hai... Could feel it
"its your love that ties me back"... I just dont get love...:(
How did the exams go???
darkness n love..
wonders if we need nirvana?
am happy with just living an happy life :P
or maybe I have already attained nirvana?
and I wonder :)
have a nice day mate... cheers...
best looking blog EVER!
:)
makes me smileeeee
very nicely written!! Your love that holds me back.... btw I like your new template specially the twinkling stars!!
though i had already commented on fb...still
*sigh*...amazing...
PS: love the new title and the new look..
Good one :) ..
if its a choice between nirvana and love.. i would definately choose love :) ....
i felt this post was a little gothic...
listen to come undone by duran duran...
feel the chill...
tc
tum itna beautifully deep kaise likh leti ho aayu baby.
n yes i loved d templt.
@ TPo,
Nirvana like marriage is a part of life, and one of the most important one too! So its like essential to take it up for once, and it is human, okay? =D =P
And thankyou for the template..meworkedhard :)
@ Mayz,
People say a phoenix rises from ash..and hence, we all carry hope on the tip of our heart..and live with expectations of attaining Nirvana :-)
# Abhinav,
Aur kya! tumhare liye hi toh prem patra likha tha =)
# Anurag,
Gratias =)
# The Poet Manque,
Want me to add it to my poem,do you? =)
~ You want me to attain Nirvana,
A bliss from the world's odds and blacks,
But how do you suppose me to do that?
Its your love that ties me back ~
*Crystal
~ A touch to set the soul alive ;
To give the profound bliss,
Your love to fill the eternal void,
Freedom by a tender kiss ~
* Poet Manque
# Indrajit,,
Nope, my friend. It was a serenade to a person who you admire, and he wants you to leave him and attain other things of supreme bliss, but you on the other hand find it difficult to leave his own unconditional love which he gives you, and Nirvana is a far fetched dream.
That was the idea I had..
" tu chahta hai mai mukt ho jaau,
Aisa ho sakta hai ki mai tere prem ko chhod chala jau?
Its okay! Don't worry ! =P
# Mehreen,
=)
Aww, thats such a great compliment. I always prefer few words than writing at length, because its really tough for me to cut it short if I write a long poem or story.. but thankyou so much.. and you write even more well!
# D Gypsy,
Longed for a change..thats why. Somehow its a bit emo..my current blog get up and all..but hey, which of these are already taken? haven't seen any by these names !..
and nirvana..lol..whatever you suppose it as!
# Tinni,
I want it since so long! Mr.God doesn't listten to me ever! =(
# Yamini,
Yippiee. thankyouverymuch! =)
# Raka,
Lol..yes,baby! I love writing about things which aren't much talked abt.
And thanks.
# Sawan,
No no..if you look at it from another persepective, it isn't all that saddie saddie type..I'm good infact great, don't cha worry! =)
Gratias!
# Rakesh,
Doesn't it say "you" want me to attain nirvana?..hence..the person loved doesn't want me anymore..and wants me to fly away, but I find it difficult because its his love that ties me back. Okay?
# Keshi,
Oh God. I'm glad I saw a comment of yours, after sucha long time ! Muah!
And *sigh*..I know you're one maverick like me, and on a formal note, going against your instinct is wrong.
BUT.. if your instinct was affected by what some people said, and wrongly judged you according to what you wrote, its a sheer waste of time to pay any heed to
them..'cos if you know you're good inside, then you shouldn't give a damn to losers. I've seen so many blogfriends who left because people poked their heads and said all sort of wrong things. BUt come on, everyone has a diff. perspective over every single thing, when the views match, the frienship goes, and if it doesn't, one person lost is okay ! And people change, maybe not intentionally, but due to circumstances, but we have to learn to move on. Jut last year i had a horrible fight with some great friends of mines, due to misconceptions, but then, they've forgotten me,and m still trying to do so , and "moving on".. we never kill a path if a thorn plucks us, right? Love you loads.. tc
And be happy with the people who know you. trust you.. and care for you.
*Big bear hug!*
The Rat,
"Love which lasts the longest is the love is not returned". =)
What if its one sided, and the other wants to get rid of you?..then ..you have to leave the moh-maaya and move towards the path to Blis..
# Daydreamer,
Me and in love?..that's like a LOL moment ! =D..
Nopsey..i ain't..I assure you!
This was pure fiction !
And oh yes..nirvana has to be attained in everyone's life at one point or the other. =)
# Smriti,
Don't worry! you wun have to search for it.. you always get it.."luck by chance" types ;)..
And yup..the blog mode is grim, but m trying to add some joy with new blog name suggestions..go vote on the poll in the right side of the page!
# Joie,
=)
# Arv,
Happiness doesn't come with nirvana alone..soo many things can make it happen!..=)
But we can keep pondering over the genuine reason for our happiness..cun me? =D
thanks..
@ Sphinx,
Wow. Thankyou very much !
# Meghna,
Makes me glad that it does. =)
# Moi,
had to work hard to find something like that..thankyu! =)
# Shruti,
Yup..me saw it! =)
thnkyouu..*hugs*
# Charmed One,
Who wouldn't long for love,my friend..
those who get,stay happy, and those who don't..weep for it there whole life.=)
i pray that you do get it :)
# oo7,
=)
Sure..will do !
# Preetilata,
Hie Preetu! Where've you been, ha?
And writing like this 30%-ideas,40%-imagination,20%-inspiration from all you wonderful people and 10%- style ! ;)
and whu is the lucky guy :P ?
ur too small for nirvana baby.. :) Nice to c ya bak now.. :)
Hope u had a rocking time wid those exams..??
Take care n keep smiling.. :)
Nikhil
love doesnt tie.
:)
I want 'nirvana' and i want love too!! :-D
Strong feelings portrayed with such simple and nice words!! only u can do this Aayushi!!
True, love never ties....but it is also not easy to let go love so easily!!
www.enchantinganki.wordpress.com
petty little things like love n emotions will always cause a hindrance but strong is the soul which can overcome these trivialities and attain enlightenment:D
but then many may say that nirvana is in those trivialities itself:)
I knw...its all so damn confusing!!!
four lines of beauty! :)
# Peter,
Koi ho toh batau! Pure fiction :'(
# MultiMenon,
Exams and rocking time? Oxymoronic statement! =P
They were good..except for CHEMISTRY and COMPUTER. *faints*
# Hp,
When you love someone and the other doesn't, and wants you to leave him, then it does
# Ankita,
There you go! You got my feelings right, thats what I wanted to say.=)
When you want to opt out of a relationship from someone who you really love,(and he doesn't return the love so heartily) then opting out f that love is really tough.
Gratias !
# Comfortably Numb,
I can get the tit bits, go on! =P
But you got my feelings right, that's exactly how my sentiments on the tpoic are :)
# Leo ,
Aah! Gratias !
Attachement eh?
:)
Nice!
OKAY!
@ Pisku,
=)
@ Rakesh,
OkAY!
Give up the sense of *I*, attain nirvana. :)
Multum, in parvo. Take a bow.
Peace.
=)
Those kind words !
beautifully expressed!
Nirvana.. Im waiting too...
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