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Jan 2, 2009

Up above the world so high

He was sitting by the door of the shop, bearing the pungent smells of different spices, as they were being fried near him in a huge bowl, which he had been seeing since some “ages”. It was a popular dhaaba in which he had been working. He was lazily daydreaming, when he the shop owner coming inside. “Aye Rohan, three cups of tea”. I went down to get them. When I came back after telling the cook to make the tea, I stood at the kitchen’s door, and looked at my master, busy yapping down on his mobile. He found this gadget very peculiar. It had just been introduced, and was totally new for him. Meera didi came walking near him, and perched herself on a stool near the kitchen. She started working on the profit and loss of the shop for the current day, but was interrupted by Rohan’s voiceà “Didi, yeah mobile se hum kisi se bhi baat kar sakte hai?”. (Can we talk to anyone with this mobile thingie?)She look up at him, irritated on being interrupted,and hastily replied “Haan. Kar sakte hai.” (Yeah. We can) Seeing her being irritated he kept mum, and went down to lie down, quickly covering his face with the torn and tattered piece of cloth as a “blanket”. He didn’t realize when he feel into a deep sleep, and when he realized, the shop was about to be closed, and there were hardly any people left in the shop. He didn’t have to worry, because he lived nearby, in Meera didi’s mansion. The only difference was that she lived in a mansion, and he in the small and lonely servant quarters. He had seen a PCO near by, and he thought this would be a great chance to talk to the person who he had been longing to. He immediately took some pennies he had saved up, and putting on a woollen cap, hurried towards the PCO. He picked up the receiver and a middle-aged man’s gruff voice came down “Kaun hai?” (Whose it?) “Mai Rohan, mujhe baat karni hai!”(I’m Rohan. I want to talk.) “Tu baat hi kar raha hai, bewakoof”, he replied, with a crustiness in his voice. “Maaf kariyega. Mujhe apni maa se baat karni hai”. (I’m sorry, I want to talk to my mother.) “Number batao, kaha rehti hai?” (Tell me the number, where does she stay?”) “Number toh mujhe nahi pata.” (I don’t know the number) “ Toh kya maine duniya bhar ke maaon ka number leke rakha hai?” (So have I kept record of the world’s mommies’ phone numbers?) “Maafi Sahab ji. Who yahaan nahi rehti. Who aasmaan ke paar,kisi chamakte sitaarein mein hai” (She doesn’t stay here, she beyond the sky, happily living in a bright star) “Pleease meri unse baat karwa dijiye. Main unko harr roz sapne mei milta hoon, woh kehti hai ki woh mujhse jaldi milne aaengi. Lekin abhi tak nahi aayi. (Please let me talk to her. I always meet her in my dreams, she promises to come soon. But she hasn’t till now”

“I miss her”

67 comments:

Express said...

awwww

*sniff*

:( :( :(

mommy!!!!!

Chriz said...

sounds like a sad one... i dunno hindi :(

Swayam said...

:(...
ps: sent in the mail

Suresh Kumar said...

Saal ke pehle din hain apne rula diya :(

Emotional and a nice one.

SMRITI said...

Thodi Sad story hai...par sachchai bhi hai. Jahaan saal ke pehle din kai log 2-5K woh parties jaa rahe hain, paise foonk rahe hain...wahi issi duniya mein kuch bachche apno ke liye tadap rahe hain.. :(

Moving. Touching. :(

Pranav Kumar V said...

I don't even know what to say!! :|
Wondering how real such things are to thousands of people all over the world!! Not exactly in the same way though. Wow!! You already got my train of thoughts to leave the station!!

Good one

Great

see you when I see you... :)

Akshaya Kamalnath said...

simply beautiful.

Abhinav said...

Really nice!
Just do one thing more, remove this from the top

meta name="ProgId" content="Word.Document">

;-)

Anurag said...

That's so nice Aayushi ..I wonder what the mann had to say to that when the child told him that.....Just goes to show the mindset of a naive street kid depived of his education and his mother could be like...Sadd...

The above post though needs some editing....Serious Editing :P

Trinaa said...

mummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmaaaaa! :( :( :(

Hemanth Potluri said...

sissy u made me cry :(....thats a wonderful thing u rote yaar :)....love ya loads sissy :)...some memories did flash reading it :)..

urs..hemu..

Rakesh said...

Your EQ seems to be high these days Aayushi, wassup?

Phoenix said...

:( sniff sniff

Kartz said...

Poignant. Period.

I've read one on similar lines... Reminded me of it. Innocence.

Peace.

Preetilata【ツ】 said...

no words aayu. very beautiful and deep.

but in the 4th n 5th line i gues 'I' is there by mistake in place of 'he'

Alok said...

Nicely brought out emotion. Good job done!

WarmSunshine said...

Awww so sweet Aayushi...

the child's innocence is so beautifully portrayed...

sad... but beautiful

*hugs*

keep up the good work :)

The Rat... said...

rude rude telephone operator....

so so innocent kid...


:'-(

Good one aayushi..keep writing..

I Walk Alone!!! said...

Sad story to begin the year. But surely need to appreciate your writing. Happy new year girl. Take care. God bless ya!!

MultiMenon said...

ouch...dat was an undertone of love,tho it was a sattire,I loved it.. :)

take care..
Nikhil..

CяystąL said...

@ Express,
:)

CяystąL said...

@ Chriz,
The english translation is given,mifriend..

CяystąL said...

@ Swayam,
Replied..!!

CяystąL said...

@ Suresh,
Sowwie! :(
I wasn't intending to do that..I simply wanted to put up the emotions of a small innocent kid into words.

Gracias!

CяystąL said...

@ Smriti,
Rightly said..they live sucha pitiful life, and we over here selfishly hog down our morals and are forevr asking for more.


Thnkyouu!

CяystąL said...

@ Pranav,
I know,mate..you really have to wonder when such incidents come up in our lives..just watching a kid eating stuff from a dustbin shocked me..but then..thats how the world is.
Em glad you liked it. Tc!

CяystąL said...

@ Akshaya,
Welcome back..n thankyou!

CяystąL said...

@ Abhinav,
Lol. Yeah..it generally happen when I cut copy paste stories frm Word Documents :(

Thnks!

CяystąL said...

@ Anurag,
I know. Loads of editing required..but as far as my readers understand what I write..em too laazy to do that ! ;)

CяystąL said...

@ Tinnnni,
Aaawww..:-*

CяystąL said...

@ Hemz,
Thankya bro..
But whch memories flashed up in your mnd?

CяystąL said...

@ Rakesh,
EQ?
Sowwwie? *

CяystąL said...

@ Phoenix,
Don't be shoo shaad,baby..
Its a story..though it is true in most cases!

CяystąL said...

@ Kartz,
I know. Even I was inspired by a scene I saw frm a movie.


Sad world it is! :(
Thanks anyway!

CяystąL said...

@ Preetu,
Piiich..I know :(
I've got loads of editing to do in this one..thankyou for pointing out the error..and appreciating m work! :)

CяystąL said...

@ Alok,
Thanks for appreciating it! :)

CяystąL said...

@ WarmSunshine,
Thankya,Meher!
Even when I read this..I feel a weird sensation inside me..tears pool inside my eyes..tch..

Gracias anyway..em glad you liked it. Muah!

CяystąL said...

@ The Rat,
Gratias,Ratty.. =)

CяystąL said...

@ I Walk alone,
Hi..how've you been off late?
Thanks for appreciating it,bro..em glad!

CяystąL said...

@ MultiMenon,
Thanks,Nikhil =)

Akshat said...

:( :( :(

aww....man sooo sad!!!...

The words were very apt....and the story was very much life-like....and the innocence of the child was very sweet to read.....

Keep up the good work...

Take Care

Rakesh said...

EQ=Emotional Quotient... Especially with the last few posts - meetin with God and all...

abhishek said...

beautifully expressed

Kartz said...

Reality reality...

Yeah, I echo what you said. Neither happy, nor sad. Living each moment. Shuttling between home and staying with granny. Reading "A Thousand Splendid Suns" and "Time Travel in Einstein's Universe" (the latter, for the nth time!)

Tum batao... School/College keeping you occupied?

Peace.

---
Yep, sad world.

I dunno of any movie. I hardly watch movies. But I fail to recollect which book... Darn!

Indrajit said...

Hi
Well I did not like people being rude to this cute guy.

Touching though...
:(

Tc..

the pink orchid said...

awwweeee... poor thing.. precious post..

Lena said...

awww.. that was a very touching and a very beautiful story :)

ceedy said...

Very well written.....but now I want to make sure which service provider reaches that far :)

Femin Susan said...

Hi………
Your words echo in my ear.
Great! Keep writing…….
Good week………

Arv said...

I wish that someone opens up a line to that place soon :(

CяystąL said...

@ Akshat,
Em soo happy you guys liked it! :)
Thanku thanku!

CяystąL said...

@ Rakesh,
Aheem..you guessed it right.
Em actually lost in te blues..rather than having an icrease in my Eq! :D

CяystąL said...

Gratias Abhishek!

*~*{Sameera}*~* said...

Awww!That left me ...

Good one dear :)

Meghna said...

quite emo....nice one!

CяystąL said...

@ Indrajit,
That's the world!

CяystąL said...

@ Pink Orchid,
Thnkyou! :)

CяystąL said...

@ Lena,
Em glad the story touched ya...
Graciias!

CяystąL said...

@ ceedy,
If you find one of the sort..telll me fuurst!

CяystąL said...

@ Femin Susan,
My good..thnkyouuU! :)

CяystąL said...

@ Arv,
I really want to be told abt this whenever its done :(
whts the use of all this crap technology whn we can't talk to those up-abv-the-sky b'ful people ? :((

CяystąL said...

@ Sameera,
Thanks,sweetie =)

CяystąL said...

Thnkyou Meghdu =)
Emo? lol? =P
And as for my reply to tht post of yuors..I know this isn't a plc to discuss personal matteers..but its high time people started listening to me. =). Sorry if you didn't like it.

sawan said...

wow, such a touching one!! beautifully written!

CяystąL said...

Thanks a lot,buddy!
Welcome here..

I'll try 2 be truthful said...

:)

CяystąL said...

:))