Till yesterday I had my freedom; but something about today makes me feel tied.
I walk down the passage of moonlight looking upto the sky..something makes me feel like you just smiled!
Now, even the moon fails to notice me..maybe 'cos I'm wearing black..
Drifting me away from the faith we share..straight yet slack!
I walk down the passage of moonlight looking upto the sky..something makes me feel like you just smiled!
Now, even the moon fails to notice me..maybe 'cos I'm wearing black..
Drifting me away from the faith we share..straight yet slack!
68 comments:
nice one crystal..!!!
hope everything is fine..!!
wow! nice one! and I did have a smile, when you had mentioned bout it!
:):)
poignant...profound...
Moon may fail to notice u but d stars won't miss one of their own:)
No getting away from the tag...hv 2 do it!!!
why this emotional atyachar is happening on kids nowadays:-w
whoz responsible temme :-?
abhi watt lagata hun :D
it's beautiful.
lovely :)
Short n Sweet :)
Emotive, to say the least... Runs deep. Very deep.
Peace. Be well.
Yeh kya haal bana rakha hai?
deep and beautiful!
Keshi.
Is there some1 who makes u write like this or the inspiration comes from deep inside....
I presume its the second one.... A born poet.
sky, stars, moon...going celestial are we Aayu?? :)
This was touching...reminds me of my adolescent life ...now that seems ages ago. :(
we need to cheer up soon puchku..this will get us nowhere!
Loved this one, girl.
So deep! So thoughtful.
Looks like my darkness is finally rubbing off on you!
:D
:)
:)
lovely verse...
but i love the Picture even more...
"something makes me feel like you just smiled!..." was the saddest line...somehow
I guess sometimes... u have to look at teh sky and imagine the signs means smile...
i hope this post had nothin to do wid ur life...n everythin is still nice n happy thr...keep smilin kiddo :)
lot of depth :)...wat happen sissy .?
urs..hemu..
meri behna ko gothic k bhoot ne fir pakad liya :P
nice sister.......
Gosh this one really does run deep..
Hope everything is fine around you...
I know that feeling of being tied or the suffocating feeling...
Dont worry... its just a passing phase.. cos the moon will surely look down at you and smile :) !!!
wuts happenin aayushi? something tells me u feel lost :(
Please dont drift away... come back :)
was it a no moon night?
Taking forward frm where ceedy left........
Ye kya haal banaa rakhaa hain ...kuch lete kyun nahin :P :D
Deep and strong!!
I hope this is fictitious cause if it isn't then you really gotta cheer up!!!
Take Care
everything Ok??
hugs
@ Yamini,
Thnx.
@ Shrav,
You did? Niiiice =)
@ Cn,
all of them do.
@ Peter,
not a joke.
@ Preeti,
:)
@ Winne the Poohi,
Welcome here..and thnkyou! :)
Thnks Born Vagabond =)
@ Kartz,
Thanks =)
Bt can't be sure the being well part
@ Ceedy,
Behaal!
Gratias Keshi.
@ Suresh,
Inside feeling..
@ Smriti,
I love them. Thts why!
@ Trinaa,
:(:
(mixed emotions!)
@ Sid,
Your darkness?
Nah. My own light! :)
@ ShoeGirl,
you like the picture?.
Why? :)
And yes..I survive by imagining the smile.
@ Mayz,
No words fer that-!
@ Hemz,
A lot!
@ DD,
Nothing like tht!
I write what I feel,brother.
@ CharmedOne,
It is so suffocating that you get choked at a moment! ..but thanks for the concern..:)
@ Sawan,
That smething tells you te truth!
@ Arv,
Ship pleasE! hehehe
@ Chriz,
t'was there.
@ Anurag,
Prescribe karo please :P
@ Anurag,
Prescribe karo please :P
@ Anurag,
Prescribe karo please :P
@ Akshat,
I need to..but dunno how! :|
! 007,
no.
ki hous yaar??
have faith in yourself
everything will be fine.
say cheese...
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that's what i am talking about.
take care
p.s.
----
'rainboy' wrote something today.
See, now even your posts are becoming like your pictures - intriguing...
*even the moon fails to notice me..maybe 'cos I'm wearing black..*
what are you hding from? light?
:)
Its beautiful and rhyming-the beauty is that it is so simply put across that you can't help but exclaim-"mushy"!
aayushi, ive sent u a request in ur yahoo msngr, if at all u login ter. if u dont, kindly add me to ur gtalk : anil.sawan@gmail.com
lovely...
beautiful the way it rhymed:)
well written babes
Buts its dark n a wee bit depressing... all well rite?
@ oo7,
Trying to hold on to it..:)..
Thnx! :))
@ Rakesh,
They are?...hmmmmmmm! :)
@ I'll try,
Yea..maybe,buddy! :)
@ Mithe,
Lol..it is?
Thnx! :))
@ Sawan,
Added! :D
Gratias Meher :)
@ Divku,
Yes baby..somewhat!
Awww!
*Hugs*
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