She opened her window and took in a gasp of air.
Rustling her locks, and making her "feel" her life so fair..
The wind with it took off the cloth covering her face..
Her eyes of a pure blue were disclosed with utmost grace..
She opened her mouth and in her voice so grave,
Uttered-"The Phoenix has risen again"
Not again will it let ignorance kill her deep..
No more will she sleep..no more will she sleep.
**
Another of my instant creations. Humph!
This isn't exactly the "best" that I could come up with on sucha great eve. I'm so not in my highest mood to come up with the brightest f poems or stories. But again..this is new year,guys. The time when we're put forth in front of new oppurtunities, new options, to make new initiatives of winning back on life. And if you've been down in the dumps like me (Covered with a thick woolen muffler, and all those icky medicines down your stomach, isn't exactly how I planned New year to be :P)..So here's Crystal..wishing you all a HAPPY NEW YEAR!
{The real new year party is gonna be on 31st. Hang in there!)
Dec 29, 2008
And then..the Phoenix rises.
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Just hope you get to treat yourself with a whole different set of meds on 31st!! :P
@the poem... again a new beginning, a new day, a new hope, a new dream, a new goal... a soon enough its all going to be the same old stuff!!
2 days to go... step up on the fun-factor... see you when I see you... :)
nice poem. :) hope this cute phoenix keeps rising high n high up.
wish u a very happy new year ahead. :)
Keep Rising from the ashes
:)
Nice poem
:)
I await the 31st
:)
And whats up with that header/template you were gonna make for my other Blog?
Humph
:x
:D
Was not that bad... but not your best either. But enjoyed the poem.
Upanishad says 'Ye Suptheshu Jaagruthi' means 'One who is awake even in his sleep'. Your last line made me remind it.
Somehow, the word Phoenix has a negative meaning in my mind. Thanx to the x-man series and the Phonexi Character in it.
Happy New Year and Enjoy the Party
ugh oh.. get well soon crystal... phoenix shudnt take much time to rise back to life...
and yeah Happy 2009...
Not bad at all...liked it :)
Get well soon sweetie...Happy 2009....still hanging on for the "real new year party" :)
ah, thatz not so good news.. get well soon...
i liked it :)
happy new yr to u too :)
instant?????? baap re!!!!
u gimme complex :P
happy '09 kiddo :)
sissy that was a wonderful thing..:)..u shall rise up more and more :)...Happy New Year in advance :)...
urs..hemu..
Hey Crystal, Hope you get well in time to down those yummy kebabs with glasses of wine on the new year's eve... Wish you a great year ahead.
Well that ain't really bad ....I like Rhyming though :P
Happy waala new Year to you :P
have a wonderful year ahead pretty baby! luv u loads..mwaaah :)))
n i like shaking that shaking her locks wala part..could actually imagine u doing it. :D
hey happy new year... everybody sure should rise again... inspite of what they've been through... as they chalti ka naam hai gadi...
Not your best!! :|...but better than my best!! :P
Happy New Year too you...still hanging for 31st!! :P
Take Care!!
You ill??? You mentioned meds in ur post... get well soon babes
Hmmm... i always have the opinion that whatever comes *straight* from the mind or heart... has it's own beauty :)
So if it's something instant... be sure i love it already :)
*smiles*
hey!!! long long loong time indeed..and i'm frightfully sowwwiieee for doing the vanishing act!!
and for the poem..real good..even for a healthy person..yes. Thats a compliment :D
and get well soon!! have a blast this new year :D
For the last post [hum nahi sudharenge! ;)]
Yes, the feeling is just .. [comment abridged.. cost cutting :P ]
This post:
All the best for the new year.. Cheerz!
Uh Oh!!!
Take care of urself girl/// pliss be gettin fine asap :P
n happy new year
Loads a luv n hugs
Div
And we shall RISE anyways. :) Nice one girl!
Happy New Year to ya MWAH!
Keshi.
Whoooppppeeeeeeeeeeee........Happy New Year to you too :D
That was sooo nice..And yeah..We are gonna be rising up and above all those grey times,into glory and better moments as life on the other side is gonna be a lot more rosy..
Happy New Year sis.. :)
take care..
@ Pranav,
Yeah why not..next time I'm kill..I'll come to you for the medicines..deal? =P
And thou speakest the truth.. whatever may happen..we always get back to the same old stuff after any disaster or joyful moment that may occur..so is life! :)
HAPPY NEWW YEAR!!!
@ Preetu,
I wish so as well! :)
Happy happy new yeaR! :)
@ Riversoul,
Areyyy..which blog header are you talking about? :o
But jo bhi hai..I'll design it..will will! =)
Happy new year,Sidddddddddie!
@ Suresh,
Yup..i know it isn't my best,but thats how I intended it to be as well :)
Cheerz and a very happy new year to yu! :)
@ The Rat,
:)
It will take some time..but the rise will be worth it =)
Happy new year to yu too./
@ Smriti,
Yuppa..hang in there..its coming! ;)
@ Xh,
Thanks,bro..
Wish the same for myself ;)..
A very happy new year to you!!
@ Richa,
Gratias,ladkiii ;)...
Happy new year to yu tooo!!
@ Mayz,
Its better writing sense in 48 hours rather than shit in 48 seconds..pich :P..
A happy happpy new year to you too!
@ Hemz,
I wish so too,broda..=)
Happpyy new year to you tooo!
@ Rakesh,
Don't worry..I'll still GULP down the yummilicious kebabs..even if I'm well or not ;)..
Happy new year!!!
@ Anurag,
Main chal rahi thi zindagi ki dagar parr..
Aa gaya shaitan tere jaisa baadha daalne mere safar parr..
Rhyming effect? ;)
Happpppppppyy new yeaR!! :))
@ Trinaa,
Awwwwwelleey..thnkyouu bachhuuu! :-*..
My locks can be very well imagined by people who've seen my pics..haii na? ;)..
Lovee you toooo..muaaah..and a veryyy happy new yeaR!
@ Swayam,
Rightly said,mate..everyone rises frm the ashes..however slow maybe the process..*hugs*
And welcome back!!!
Happyy new year!
@ Akshat,
Thanks for giving me the false compliment.made me happy :D..lol..kiddin'..
A very happy new year to you too,budddy!!
hi..... lovely poem and a nice display pic....
would love to have your comments on my stories.....
do visit my blog and have a read...
and happy new year......
@ WarmSunshine,
Aww..thanks,sweetie! I really appreciate that feeling in fellow buddies..
Muaah..and a very happy new year to you! :)
@ Swati,
Aaaaaaah..I'm glad you're finally back =P..
And thanks a megaton..;)
Belated merry X'mas..and a supppppper happy new year! :)
@ Abhinav,
Lol..I know tum kabhi nahi sudhroge..=P..
And shit yaar..kanjoosi ki limit hai! :P
Happy new year anyway ! :D
@ Heart n' soul,
Thankyou Divllii! =)
i wish I do get well reallllllly soon!..
And a supper dupper happy new year to you,teddybear! :)
@ Keshi,
Gratias,milady! :)
Muuah..
@ Meghna,
Thanks..and same to you :)
@ MultiMenon,
Yup..WE will do that! :)
Happy new year to you too,bro ! :))
@ Muthu,
Sure..will do that sometime.
Happy new year
awwww Crystal,, hope u doin wel now.. n al geared up to welcome 2009.. :-)
Wishin u a vry Happy n prosperous 2009.. :-)
The phoenix has no option but to rise ovr n over again! i'd alwayzz like to believe tat.. :-) take care,, u.. :-)
Hmmm... Read your previous post too. I can quite relate to that. Trust me. And when such times come back to haunt you, it's so damn killing... You feel as if nothing can lift you up again.
The similar tryst I had set me thinking... People probably come in to our lives to teach us something. To make us a complete-r version of what we already are.
Planning to blog on that soon. In fact, it's all written! Just not getting the head to put it up. Actually, it is a sequel to this. Almost similar lines...
Coming to this one... Come on. Achcha hi tha. Kuch kami nahin hai... Of course, one can always go one better the next time! A fine piece of poetry nonetheless.
Get well soon. New Year wishes, once again.
*hugs*
Peace. take care. Be well.
It might not be your best,but it's good :)
*Hugs*
@ mUzer,
I like believing that too..don't care if it doesn't happen! :)
@ Kartz,
Aaw..those were real kind words..
Thanks a ton!
*hugs*
Thnkoo Sammy!
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